Farzana Khan
February 27, 2016
Eng 1121-0465
Partner Review: Ervin Ibragimov
- Opener
“Roughly 80 percent of people cannot answer this question.”
- Thesis Statement
Not included in essay along with three subtopics.
- Three Subtopic Paragraphs
Four body paragraphs were used in the essay.
- Topic Sentences
There were no topic sentences incorporated in body paragraphs.
- Transitional Phrases
Transitional phrases were needed but not used.
- Grammar and Conventions
Grammar was fair, conventions were used but some incorrectly.
- Conclusion
Since thesis was not used in introduction and I could not find in conclusion. Lead out was acceptable.
