Paper 2 Sensors

Rubric

Project 2 Outline Rubric

Item	1	3	5
Introduction Thesis statement	Ignored	Attempted	Explanatory Thesis statement. What you plan to do for the client.
Introduction Description of system choice hominal or computational.	Ignored	description	Definition of computational or hominal and clear plan for use in the attraction
Introduction description of step-by-step and audience interaction with the attraction	Ignored	description	Definition of step-by-step plan and focus of its use for the attraction
Introduction How is integration of audience and technology key to the presentation of the attraction	Ignored	question presented with no outcome	Question integrated into the introduction and answered.
Supporting paragraph 1 Insert step-by-step chart Discuss chart content including audience path.	Ignored	audience experience not tied in to step by step plan	Step-by-step details discussed. Tied to main idea. Step-by step diagram inside essay. Supports main idea
Supporting paragraph 2 Insert the control system flow chart and define all the components.	Ignored	System choices presented.	System choices presented supporting the main idea. Flow chart inserted into the essay
Supporting paragraph 3 present sensor choices and tie into your audience path and sub systems triggered. Use citations	Ignored	Sensor types discussed	Sensor choices tied to main idea. Audience experience and sub systems triggered described. Citation for each sensor
Conclusion Restate your thesis. Present why your step by step, control system and sensor choices support your main idea.	ignored	question presented with no outcome	Restate your thesis. How did networking the technologies support your thesis? If you have the opportunity what type of technologies would you want to work with and contribute. What technology do you need to study to complete this goal?
Vocabulary	ignored	5 words used	5 words used and defined
Citations	ignored	mentioned	all content included

Project 2 Rough draft Rubric

Item	0	3	5
Introduction Thesis statement	Ignored	Attempted	Explanatory Thesis statement. What you plan to do for the client.
Introduction Description of system choice hominal or computational.	Ignored	description	Definition of computational or hominal and clear plan for use in the attraction
Introduction description of step-by-step and audience interaction with the attraction	Ignored	description	Idea integrates with thesis statement
Supporting paragraph 1 Insert step-by-step chart Discuss chart content including audience path.	Absence of support for main points	Generalizations with no specific content to support main theme	Discussion is well focused on the topic and supported with details.
Supporting paragraph 2 Insert the control system flow chart and define all the components.	Absence of support for main points	Generalizations with no specific content to support main theme	Ideas unified to theme of essay. Supported with details.
Supporting paragraph 3 present sensor choices and tie into your audience path and sub systems triggered. Use citations	Absence of support for main points	question presented with no outcome	Ideas unified to theme of essay. Supported with evidence
Conclusion Restate your thesis. Present why your step by step, control system and sensor choices support your main idea.	ignored	question presented with no outcome	Restate thesis. Main ideas are clear with defined outcomes.
Vocabulary	ignored	5 words used	5 words used and defined. Effective word usage
Citations Ideas supported by Evidence	no evidence	mentioned in writing non-specific use of evidence	foot noted, Authors ideas are supported with logic and value
Sentence structure	confusing sentences.	incomplete sentences Repetitive content	Good sentence structured. Varied lengths and word usage.
Grammar and spelling	5 or more spelling and grammar errors	1-4 spelling and grammar errors	Good grammar and spelling
Word choice	slang or misuse of words.	Repetitive word choices. Inaccurate work choices	Variety of words used. Interesting and vivid words used.
The theme of the essay is clear and consistent	The writing is one long description of the videos without any theme.	The theme is present in the introduction or conclusion without consistency	Evidence, knowledge and relevant information

Project 2 Final Rubric

Item	0	3	5
Introduction Thesis statement	No thesis statement	Main idea is simple	Main idea clear and well developed
Introduction Description of hominal or computational system	Ignored	description	Definition of computational or hominal and clear plan for use in the attraction
Introduction description of step-by-step and audience interaction with the attraction	Ignored	question presented with no outcome	Ideas integrated with thesis statement
Structure and organization	paragraph structure is missing no organization evident.	Limited attempts to organize around central idea, paragraphs stand alone. Few or no transitions	Organized and sequential appropriate content for the assignment
Conclusion Restate your thesis. Present why your step by step, control system and sensor choices support your main idea.	ignored	question presented with no outcome	Restate thesis. Main ideas are clear with defined outcomes.
Vocabulary	ignored	5 words used and defined	5 words used and defined. Effective word usage.
Citations	No citations	mentioned in writing.	foot noted. Evidence used to support ideas
Notes	Ignore	A few notes taken and used for rewrite	Most notes from previous rubrics read and integrated into the project
Grammar and spelling	no updates to grammar or spelling	1-4 spelling or grammar errors	Good grammar and spelling

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