In Today Summary of the Juggler’s Brain, my peer review reminds me about how to be more precise to the reader’s attention. I also wondering for a such larger size article, how to avoid leaving important point  out since I have to deal we so much information.

Jean

In this passage, the author points out the internet affects people mind, as he elaborates many different ways it happens. The writers support his point by scientific invention. The author keep supporting his point by mentioning the evolution of the technology such as the internet and the vast majority of applications that get involved in. Additionally, he mentions that any new technology is always a continuity. The writer continues to back up his point by pointing out how media…

In this article , the author brings attention to the drawback of students who don’t use formal manners when communicating with their professors, or mentors. The writer uses experiences from students or professors, history and surveys  to support his argument. The author continues to support his point by mentioning that the lack of protocol degrades student writing skills.