According to this peer review, I can talk with the classmate about the article, and to understand the different kinds of the thesis that they had. Just like I learn from MiKi, she found a simple, easy and useful thesis to do her summary which is the advantage and disadvantage about the internet. But, I did a difficult way because I think too much and to choose my thesis that is hard and the thesis is the internet is a mind altering technology. So, I need to make  a lot of paragraphs to combine together. After that, I do not need to think too much, simple is best.