Dear Steve,

I learned that I need to plan out my summaries better. The body of the summary has been very detailed and informative according to my reviewer but the thesis was misleading. I understand now as to what the thesis should be and I will update the summary accordingly. The shorter summary was much better in the sense the the body supported the thesis with less but as detailed information as the 350-word document. No questions come to mind at this moment of writing regarding how to write summaries more effectively.

Best,                                                                                                                                                                            Patrick Wojno