Through out this topic of Language Narrative, at first I was a bit confused but later on the topic was cleared up top me. As I started writing about my own person experiences I felt much more comfortable and my mind just flowed onto the paper while I wrote. However, looking back on my own writing I have come to realize that there are of course strengths and weaknesses within my essay. I seemed to realize slowly that everything I did write seemed to be coming from a distant memory so details (although prevalent within my writing) were vague at best and could’ve been improved on if I could remember my experience better. Nonetheless, it was not something I could change although I would’ve liked to. On the other hand, I did find that a lot of what I wrote, I did really like. The transitions were smooth and I made a good point on why my essay changed me and others as a whole.