Author Archives: Marta Kucemba-Stryjewska

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I do not have any questions regarding college research

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GA 16

When it comes to college writing I’m always concerned about the introduction and conclusion. I don’t want to repeat myself or just re-write the same ideas in other words.

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Hurricane Sandy

  To be honest I thought that it would be like last year…media exagerrating about a storm that didn’t really do any damage. It turned out I was unfortunately very wrong. During the storm I was sitting in my apartment … Continue reading

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GA # 13 : Tawaina & Marta

Thesis – the essay has a thesis that is a central idea of the essay. It should be interesting and original. Order of Events- The order of paragraphs is of high importance. It creates a flow throughout the reading. It … Continue reading

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GA group 1: Marta, Rosario, Tawaina

  1.Claims and Evidence – evidence and claims is developing a thesis and supporting it with evidence. A claim can be supported with a personal experience or a quote-20% 2.Development- development is how well the paragraphs are developed, making sure … Continue reading

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photographable…

For me a photographable moment is the one that you want to share with others. Our memory is maybe good but doesn’t last too long and with photographs we can go back to places and people that are very important to … Continue reading

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We like to take pictures of things that inspire us, that makes us happy, that we want to save for the future. A lot of the moments that people described were memories of the past when when people felt sympathy and compassion provoked by … Continue reading

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Unphotographable

This is picture I did not take of a young homeless girl holding a small baby in her arms begging for some money in the subway train. No one is looking at her. Everyone eyes are on their iPads or … Continue reading

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