4 thoughts on “Stephanie Cabrera Essay #1 Feedback”

  1. “This ongoing issue has impacted many individuals, physically and mentally” I like this sentence because it literally does make sense, this incident disturbed everyone and forced everyone to think about it, there’s no value of human life. I like this essay!!

  2. “In other words, I believe what should be done is police agencies should monitor police officers and not let them get away with the crime of killing or mistreating anyone who could be of color or white shouldn’t matter how you should be treated by the color of your skin.”

    I agree with you I think that would be a good idea having police agencies watch over another police officers in case of a bad act.

    What I do suggest is to watch over run off sentences.

    -Paulina Vega

  3. “If it’s a situation where two individuals get physical it should be held accountable to the person who is being racist…” I very much agree with you because I believe that cops should be held responsible for their actions, even more if they happen to be a racist. Excellent essay Overall.

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