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While reading your essay, I noticed that you were not missing anything. You mentioned the song and the social issue it discusses and you also included some quotes from an article. The only critique that I would say is that you should describe the sound of the song. That’s the only thing that I think you should add to your essay.
I found your essay very interesting, your issue was very clear.
I thought your essay was pretty good. But I do believe there are some things that you can work on or improve. I really liked how you described your song and made a connection with the social issue that you chose. I would say talk about the song itself more like the sound, instruments, background music, and etc. Describe the music more.