Breaking the Silence: Using Creative Nonfiction in the Classroom

One of the most eye-opening revelations of critical pedagogy in the 1990s was that learning technical academic discourse—whether how to formally analyze the meter of a Shakespearean sonnet, the articulation of a mechanism for an advanced engineering course, studying the evolution of the myth of American exceptionalism in a history seminar, or how to read warranted implications in a mathematical proof—is a terribly difficult and arbitrary process that leaves many confused students overwhelmed by feelings of powerlessness. When we consider that students are often simultaneously learning 4-5 competing sets of technical academic discourse on the fly, and that this stress would be most pronounced among cohorts of incoming freshmen, it comes as no surprise that longitudinal studies have found that students are most likely to succumb to feeling  helpless to marshal so many discourses all at once during their first two semesters in college. Although we tend to think of this problem in the narrow framework of improving academic competency in one particular classroom at a given moment in time (e.g., how to prepare students for an upcoming midterm or for an upcoming research paper), WAC pedagogy reminds us that no class unfolds in a vacuum, as it were, and, furthermore, that the most instructive perspectives for teaching often originate from a dynamic interdisciplinary approach. With this in mind, I would like to discuss the wide-ranging benefits of giving a valued place to regular (low-stakes) creative nonfiction writing activities in the classroom.

As we all know, student learning outcomes are a process, and not a product. Each student’s relative success unfolds within the interdisciplinary fabric of not just their other coursework, but through the sociocultural richness of their other personal interests and commitments outside of school as well. WAC philosophy invites us to use writing to seize on the untapped potential of these interconnections, and one of the most intriguing ways of doing so involves featuring regular creative nonfiction writing exercises throughout the semester. I should note, in passing, that these writing activities need not add to an instructor’s workload or radically change how an instructor would calculate  the final grade for a course. In fact, the most straightforward and organic way to add creative nonfiction writing to a course would be to subsume it under participation or extra credit. It is precisely the “low-stakes” nature of these regular writing activities that can benefit students.

My interest in implementing creative nonfiction writing in the classroom can be traced to the work of  rhetoric scholar Douglas Hesse. Having witnessed the parallel evolution of creative writing into an autonomous academic program and studied the subsequent explosion of creative writing programs in American higher education, Hesse looks towards the model of untrammeled “process” writing and workshopping that takes place in creative writing seminars for inspiration to reinvigorate the conventional teacher-student dynamic. And while Hesse concentrates on how to adapt these intensive writing methods to first-year English composition curricula, my starting-point is that these very same principles and techniques can have far-reaching liberating effects across and between disciplines.

A regrettable consequence of the bureaucratization of higher education is that departments are often fenced off from each other in competition for ever-more exiguous resources, and, as a result, in can be very difficult for instructors to consider their course goals and design beyond the cloistered compound of their respective departments. However, building on Hesse’s innovative theories, I would submit that providing a regular (low-stakes) space for students to creatively reflect on their development—in terms of learning course material in addition to the holistic totality of their evolution as college students and young adults—would empower teachers and students alike to creatively tease out and engage with the intersections between their respective courses and other fields of study and experience. Indeed, what student or teacher wouldn’t benefit from creatively thinking and writing about (these are but a couple hypothetical examples) the thought-provoking parallels between the indeterminacy principle studied in a Physics class and Gödel’s theorems in mathematics, or, perhaps in a seminar on modern American poetry, how the terms and concepts of theoretical science are wed with a Romantic poetic vision in the work of A.R. Ammons? These intersecting perspectives would deepen and enrich each other by facilitating students’ in-depth understanding of their coursework.

Hesse maps out the terrain of writing into two distinct, and seemingly diametrically opposed worlds—the “Terra Facta” or “Terra Argumenta” of “thesis and support, information, . . . assertion, and evidence”—in short, our quantifiable expectations of student proficiency which form the basis of grading criteria in any given course—and the “Terra Imagina” of fiction whose “open lands” are exhilarating precisely because they don’t lead anywhere in particular. Without getting bogged down in a minute recapitulation of Hesse’s argument, the gist of his intervention is that our academic discourses all too often leave little or no room for the “Terra Imagina” of fiction—the open-ended terrain that imaginatively involves students in the writing of their own narrative as they find and develop interconnections between new forms of knowledge. Viewing Hesse’s theory through the lens of WAC pedagogy, I suggest that an interdisciplinary approach to using creative nonfiction writing in the classroom can provide an inclusive educational framework for students to explore, synthesize, and reflect on their own learning paths.

A More Holistic Approach to Plagiarism

In anticipation of our upcoming November 21st student workshop on Plagiarism, I would like to focus on how integrating scaffolding and frequent low-stakes writing into the structure of a course can help to counteract plagiarism by holistically addressing the needs of students. Each and every semester, plagiarism is the most common problem cited by instructors regardless of academic field or course level taught. Although a cottage industry of subscription-based services (such as Safe Assign and Turn It In) has sprung up to facilitate the detection of plagiarism in student writing, resources for dealing with the challenge of student plagiarism before the fact are comparatively scarce.

We tend to think of and deal with student plagiarism and academic dishonesty in a moral vacuum—as if it were a prohibition whose infringement must be detected, quarantined, and automatically punished. A student “charged” with plagiarism or academic dishonesty faces the rhetoric and sanctions of criminalization, and the penalties at an instructor’s disposal for responding to plagiarism and academic dishonesty are often Draconian and retributive. We must ask ourselves: does automatically failing a student who plagiarizes or recommending a student for academic suspension actually serve to prevent the incidence of plagiarism and academic dishonesty in the classroom, or do these punitive measures merely criminalize plagiarism as a kind of unspeakable taboo in the hallowed groves of academe?  It can he helpful to think of this prohibition against plagiarism and academic dishonesty as a negative command: we are enjoining our students—who sometimes have little or no support in the form of tutors or robust writing pedagogy—to learn and master the codes and conventions of academic writing on the fly.

Promoting a classroom environment of student writing from the very first day of class can yield very fruitful results in giving students confidence in their abilities, which will in turn combat against plagiarism. As Richrad Arum and Josipa Roksa found in their landmark book Academically Adrift,

“Fifty percent of students in our sample reported that they had not taken a single course during the prior semester that require more than twenty pages of writing, and one-third had not taken one that required even forty pages of reading per week. Combining these two indicators, we found that a quarter of the students in the sample had not taken any courses that required either of these two requirements, and that only 42 percent had experienced both a reading and writing assignment of this character during the prior semester.” (71)

It seems self-evident to state that plagiarism is fundamentally a problem of students not becoming personally invested in an assignment by staking out their ownership of their own ideas and language. If we assume that Arum and Roksa’s alarming findings are broadly representative of the state of higher education in America, can we reasonably expect students who are not being given the necessary opportunities to develop proficiency in academic writing and critical thinking to be able to scrupulously apply these abstract skills in their formal assignments?

During our last faculty workshop, we discussed some of the far-reaching benefits of scaffolding course content in the context of developing plagiarism-resistant assignments. The piecemeal nature of scaffolding affords several practical advantages to instructors who wish to proactively defend against plagiarism.  Scaffolding dynamically reorients what would otherwise be a daunting, be-all and end-all final paper or project as a cumulative process consisting of several smaller assignments. It is vital for instructors to engage with the reality that plagiarism is not simply the result of “student laziness”; plagiarism is also the consequence of a crisis of confidence because students (quite naturally) feel that they cannot master academic writing. Scaffolding plays an important role in making a major assignment less intimidating by helping students overcome this fear and inertia of getting started to tackle an assignment. There is a direct inverse correlation between how much confidence students can build in these critical early stages of an assignment (when the stakes are relatively low) and how likely they will be to plagiarize the work of others on the eve of a due date.

Plagiarism will always be a perpetual problem of the classroom and scholarship. I have to imagine that, among the very first cohort admitted into Plato’s Academy for philosophical training, at least one student was surreptitiously cribbing notes under his robe. And while there will never be a fail-safe remedy or panacea for dealing with plagiarism, fostering a classroom climate of frequent writing exercises, encouraging students to write about their own heuristic learning process, and developing feedback-based learning activities can all contribute towards a more holistic understanding and approach to dealing with plagiarism. Please encourage your students to attend our November 21st student workshop on plagiarism in Namm 601A!

A Snowball’s Chance In…

By the time that students reach our college classrooms, they are already veterans of the same education system that has shaped us as instructors. Although we may not always think of the students in our classroom in this way, it can be helpful to remind ourselves as instructors that each student is already an old hand at learning—their roughly two decades of experience as learners means that they have likely seen some iteration of every pedagogical trick in our repertoire. One of the central principles of the pedagogical movement known as Writing Across the Curriculum is to always strive to maintain the classroom as a space of dynamic hybridity where teaching cannot “go stale.”  In WAC parlance, this is known as fostering “an interactive multimodal learning environment,” but the meaning of pedagogical buzzwords such as “hybridity,” “interactive,” and “multimodal learning” can remain frustratingly vague in practice. How can an instructor create a classroom that is dynamic, interactive, and what does “multimodal learning” actually entail? The purpose of this article will be to seek answers to these questions by sketching out one approach in detail called “Snowball.”

The start of each class is always a somewhat fraught moment: instructors have about 5-10 minutes to project themselves and the organization and purpose of that day’s learning activity. This can take the form of outlining the overarching themes of in-class close reading or getting important content from homework problems to students. Research shows that lectures or lessons often “go stale,” as it were, during these vital opening moments of each class when students are liable to tune out and remain that way for the remainder of the class. “Snowball” is a novel kinaesthetic learning technique that takes inspiration from WAC’s imperative to creatively innovate and rethink how instructors teach and how students learn. It can be a highly effective tool for maintaining an engaged, dynamic classroom environment. A brief scenario will follow, but in a nutshell, “Snowball” contributes towards students becoming active learners through sharing and responding to each other’s concerns and ideas. Oh, and they are able to get out of their seats and throw things (at the instructor!).

At the start of class, instead of launching into the preordained script of a lecture or lesson plan, an instructor encourages all students to tear out a piece of loose-leaf and write down a question or problem that they had about the reading or homework without putting their name on the paper.

Each student then crumples up their paper into a ball and throws it to the front of the classroom in the direction of the instructor (extra points optionally awarded for targeting the instructor).

The instructor then shuffles around the mass of “snowballs” thrown by students, and all students come to the front of the class to retrieve one “snowball” to bring back to their desks.

The class then begins in earnest as each student opens up the snowball that they have retrieved and anonymously responds to the concern(s), question(s), or problem(s) raised by their fellow (anonymous) classmate. Students can then lead the classroom discussion by sharing their snowball and response with the rest of the class.

Snowball can be a great way to break the ice at the start of class. This technique is similar to a flipped classroom in that it is a participant and cooperative teaching and learning activity that empowers students as the agents of their own learning. It also has the advantage of removing the sense of shame from class participation (what the education reformer John Holt refers to as “the cat on a hot stove” phenomenon) since each snowball is anonymous and students are actually sharing and exchanging each other’s ideas. Snowball facilitates students’ dynamic engagement with course material by giving them opportunities to participate without worrying or second-guessing themselves. At the same time, each snowball becomes a meaningful vehicle for instructors to deliver course content that is truly tailored to the unique needs of their students. And, of course, it allows students to throw things at their professors—what’s not to like? I’m thankful to our co-coordinator, Rebecca Mazumdar, for initially demonstrating this novel learning technique to us.

Note-taking, Contact Zones, and the Creative Classroom

A common refrain of education scholars in the late 1970s, 80s, and early 90s was to “bridge the gap”—to overcome the divide between theories of teaching and the realities of the classroom. Part of the legacy bequeathed to us by this period of productive ferment is Writing Across the Curriculum—a host of cross-disciplinary pedagogical interventions and theorizations grounded in the practical improvement of student outcomes. One of the core principles of WAC is the power of writing as a heuristic tool to help teachers teach and students learn. This engagement in a novel rethinking of the teacher-student dynamic to improve student outcomes continues to define WAC programs to this day. In connection with our two workshops this week on Note Taking (for students) and the Creative Classroom (for faculty), I would like to focus my post on the intersection between note-taking, contact zones, and the creative classroom.

Note-taking remains a relatively underdiscussed and undertheorized aspect of the modern classroom—this even though a student’s notebook ultimately comes to form the majority of their writing for any given class. And since note-taking mediates how students integrate content from in-class lectures and out-of-class readings, note-taking truly serves as a primary nexus of teaching and learning. I think that it can be helpful to think of note-taking in the context of contact zones in the creative classroom. First coined as a term and elaborated as a concept by Mary Louise Pratt, contact zones are sites where “disparate cultures meet, clash, and grapple with each other, often in highly asymmetrical relations of domination and subordination.” Although contact zones correspond to the fault-lines of misunderstandings, contact zones also signify powerful opportunities for making meaning and fostering mutual understanding via improvisation and group interaction, like jazz musicians riffing on a theme. As we all know, misunderstandings between teachers and students abound; this is to be expected, for students and teachers are engaged in a challenging process of mutually constructing and interpreting course content. In this sense, then, students’ notes thus function as a sort of running real-time chronicle of misunderstandings and their potential remedies. If a student’s notebook contains the only tangible traces of this fluid, back-and-forth exchange, I would like to suggest that we can mine some of the untapped possibilities of note-taking by dedicating class time to discussing how students creatively process and make meaning out of course content.

For example, a page of notes is the cumulation of an incredibly complex process of constantly switching codes between discipline-specific concepts and terminology, a student’s own unique shorthand, and more universal mnemonic devices. However, as instructors we generally tend to take this complicated and dynamic feat of attention and memory for granted, and as a result very little class time is usually devoted to talking about the code-switching dimensions of note-taking. And yet knowing how our students are translating and synthesizing course content into notes is vital information for instructors and students alike. By regularly asking students how they are negotiating and making meaning out of course content, instructors can make the experience of note-taking itself an active part of classroom discourse that can in turn help instructors proactively revise or tailor lesson plans and teaching strategies during the term. Encouraging students to reflect on their own note-taking processes can likewise create new ways for students to participate in a course.

As the largest urban public university in the country, CUNY’s colleges are uniquely positioned to harness the rich, multilingual and multicultural experiences of an extraordinarily diverse faculty and student body. Although we may not generally think of note-taking as a site of dynamic exchange, a student’s notes constitute an unfolding terrain of interpretation, self-examination, and creative expression that can empower students and open up new ways for instructors to teach.

The Benefits of Freewriting: Making Learning Live

We are all saddled with anxieties about language. The art and science of writing within and outside of our fields makes students of us all. And yet, as instructors we naturally feel that we must impart our intellectual authority and credibility to students. The negotiation of this juggling act between proficiency and humility is not just an inherent difficulty of teaching, but also a powerful point of kinship with our students, who must likewise learn the fine Socratic art of humility (“The one thing I know is that I know nothing”) on the job. In this essential sense, then, teachers and students are both engaged in impersonating imperfect and incoherent roles that do not quite fit, like Pirandello’s Six Characters in Search of an Author. The purpose of this post is to suggest that the regular use of low-stakes freewriting activities in the classroom can enhance students’ outcomes and attitudes towards course material by dramatically shaking up the student-teacher dynamic. Freewriting transforms the stifling prescriptive-normative atmosphere that can take hold of a classroom’s narrative—which evokes Paulo Freire’s banking model of learning, whereby students are reduced to passive recipients of their instructors’ lessons—into dynamic code-switching between teaching and learning. In this way, freewriting can empower students to become active and creative learners, participants, and teachers in their own right.

The education activism landscape has changed considerably since the iconoclastic reformer John Holt championed the pedagogical benefit of “private papers” and “non-stops” in the 1960s, but Holt’s exhortative message to use freeform writing in the classroom to rouse both teachers and students out of preordained roles of passive detachment remains as vitally urgent today as it was during the early days of modern education reform.  What does it mean to write freely in the classroom and how can regular freewriting exercises help students identify with teachers and vice versa? We all know that the discipline-specific constraints of formal writing assignments are indispensable to helping students meet course objectives and achieve technical proficiency in any given field of study. However, frequent low-stakes freeform writing activities—such as maintaining a course diary or journal, for example—can give students agency in their own learning process by creating a classroom that is driven by dynamically open and responsive dialogue between students and instructors. Research has continually demonstrated that there is nothing more directly beneficial to the effectiveness of instruction than reorienting students’ attitudes and perceptions of themselves as active learners. Thus an instructor in a STEM field who creatively “staggers” lectures and textbook coursework with brief freeform reaction papers can facilitate student’s acquisition of desired skills by strengthening their intellectual autonomy. Freewriting serves to transform learning and teaching from a passive to a concrete and personal experience: each lecture, each assignment, and each teacher-student interaction becomes a unique pedagogical event. Comparative studies have shown that students who are regularly encouraged to critically reflect on their own individual process of learning terms and concepts are much more likely to continue to inquisitively explore beyond the prescribed confines of the text and the classroom—precisely because they feel that they have a creative stake in plotting their own path through higher-level conceptual problems and contradictions.

Imagine a student who retains a positive, lasting impression of a course more than a decade removed from his undergraduate years—in short, what every instructor (perhaps quixotically, but no less ardently) hopes for at the start of each academic semester. In particular, what our student recalls in such a positive light is one of his former professor’s idiosyncrasies—not a harsh attendance policy, or a peculiar manner of rhetorically teasing out points of discussion, but rather a quirk of the course structure itself—viz., a “requirement” to keep a completely freeform student diary chronicling one’s experience in the course from the very first day of class through the final exam. And, what’s more, the instructor, for her part, maintained her own diary during the course and shared it with students throughout the semester, unguardedly relating her unfolding experience of teaching the course material and of learning from the students themselves. Long after the terms and concepts should have faded from his memory, this student is able to vividly recollect much of the course material just by harking back to his journal entries.

The student, I will confide, is myself. And while my ill-fated pre-med studies ended abruptly with Calculus I a year later (much to the chagrin of my parents), I can attest to the value of implementing freewriting in a STEM course as the reason why I am still able to remember much more of Introductory Biology for Science Majors than I should be able to as a liberal arts Ph.D. candidate. What does all of this suggest about freewriting? Perhaps that frequent freeform writing activities unfettered by the strictures of grades can serve as a heuristic tool that spurs critical thinking and, in turn, organically leads to retention of course material.

How We Grade, How We Write: Encouraging Students to Try Again, Fail Again, and Fail Better

We have arrived at the point in the semester when most instructors are in the process of grading their first (or second) batches of student writing assignments, and many instructors may accordingly find themselves struggling to resist the urge to spill red ink (or typed comments) on students’ work. Returning to the subject of Sam’s post on the inherent frustrations of writing—and in anticipation of our upcoming November 8th workshop on Minimal Marking and Effective Grading—I would like to consider how grading strategies and peer review can facilitate students’ successful negotiation of the confidence-shaking challenges of formal writing.  Writing is nothing if not a never-ending process of editing one’s failures—or, as Samuel Beckett puts it in the aptly named “Worstward Ho,” an undaunted willingness, despite having “ever tried” and “ever failed,” to “Try again. Fail again. Fail better.” In fact, failure is such an indispensable—and unavoidable—aspect of the writing process, that it has a proper place as heuristic tool in the classroom.

How can we harness these inevitable failures of the writing process? As we all know, students’ ability to respond to their own writing as critics is indispensable to their growth as proficient writers. Research has amply shown that how we grade students’ writing plays a vital role in encouraging students to view their own writing as an active process, and not a product. Since there is no royal road towards the perfect student essay, grading techniques which invite students to continuously edit and improve on how they express their ideas in writing are invaluable in giving students the confidence to “try again.” For example, a grading system that provides students with lines of discovery or roadmaps to explore in future assignments (or to implement in revisions) can instill self-confidence by equipping students with a deeper appreciation of their own nascent abilities and a tangible baseline from which to build. As we learned last week, this willingness to tap into the existing potential of one’s early attempts at writing is the single most important means of overcoming the inertia of any writing assignment, whether a short essay or a dissertation. Conversely, grading that disproportionately penalizes students for relatively minor grammatical errors often has a chilling effect on students’ ability to view themselves as (potentially) capable writers of well-organized, effective papers.

Here I am inspired by the work of Peter Elbow, one of the trailblazing voices in the field of critical pedagogy. The chief aim of Elbow’s Learning without Writing Teachers is to galvanize teachers into rethinking their approaches to teaching and grading college writing. In our world of ubiquitous assessment metrics, Elbow’s clarion call for dispensing with the counterproductive technique of “autopsying” student writing—treating student writing as if it were dead on arrival by punitively marking up relatively trivial mistakes without offering any real hope for improvement—is as provocatively refreshing as ever. Integrating peer-review into the classroom is another great way to take up Elbow’s mantra to “teach writing as a process, not a product.” For instance, scheduling a rough draft reverse outline workshop the week before an essay is due (when lack of confidence peaks among students intimidated by the prospect of finishing an assignment alone) can foster students’ sense of themselves as proficient writers actively engaged in parsing out the logical connections between their ideas and their writing. We were all obviously student writers before becoming teachers; we know that, for all of the halting first steps and dead-ends of the writing process, there is nothing quite as satisfying (and relieving!) as seeing an assignment through the stages of brainstorming, drafting, and revising. Positively constructive grading techniques and peer-review workshops go hand-in-hand to empower students to complete formal writing assignments with confidence—to learn the fine art of “fail[ing] better.”