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  1. Deric Well done!

    These look much improved!

    My advice to you now would be to PRACTICE inking and do the WARM ups before you begin the final art. Take your time inking. Remeber to switch brushes / pens too. As you practice with the different tools you’ll find out they all make different kinds of lines and marks. Some would work great on the ice cream, while others will be good for little details like the hands on your burger guy.

    Remember to use different line weights. A heavier weight for the bottom of a glass or the burger for example, and a thinner line for fingers or those sesame seeds.

    Good Luck!

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