COMD 2313 Illustration 1, SP2017
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Hi Nina-
Nice work here. I think #1 and #3 seem the most promising. However, I’d like to see you work on the composition of both to make them more visually appealing.
On #1 and #3 you MUST get a ton of very good reference.
On #1 work on the woman’s head. It is missing the back of the skull, so get reference. Also maybe have the hair blowing back a bit. The hand and bottle too are not convincing. Find a pretty bottle and do a photo shoot!
In #3 – that RIPPING must be more pronounced… Draw the action of pulling apart, rather than hands holding bunny.