Number 1 is a completely new idea from what I showed in class but I think it could work. I feel that number 1 is a bit more figurative than some of what my thumbnails show. 聽I do want feedback on all of them to see which one could be the final choice to go with.
Hi Brandy – what is number one showing? I see the asian man is fishing… but it looks like for letter D’s… Explain.
I like #2 as a concept… but I’d like to see you really strech the limits of your imagination as to what this Machine could look like and be. try looking up how to draw mecha or machines… think of all the different stages that go into assembling a car for example… think bigger with this. Also try a few new compositions. This machine is fantasy so it can go vertical or horizontal.
I like Number 3 but would like to see you play both with composition and camera angel. You should stage a photo shoot. Since the dolphin is anthropomorphized you can just use two friends pretending to swordfight as your models.
With number one, I was trying to do something with the saying catching Zs but replace the Z for a D for dolphin and I was trying to make the Ds in the water look like dolphins by poking their heads out of the water like how dolphins would in order to breathe.
Lets go with the other 2 as in this one the concept isn’t very clear.
Got it.
ALSO…. can we PLEASE work on lightening up and enlarging those sketches?