Sorry about the clickbait format title but here are my three concept sketches. I know they’re not the actual size (apologizes obsessively) but I just wanted to make these semi final looking sketches before I moved on to the final pencil. Now here is where I’m going to start screaming to try to get your attention:
911! PROFESSOR PLEASE GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK ON MY WORK! I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE IT! IF YOU DON”T SAY ANYTHING BY SATURDAY MORNING I WOULD LIKE TO PURSUE THE BOTTOM RIGHT (OF THE HARE TRIPPING).
Thanks again professor. Sorry. I was trying to make finals week entertaining for me.
Thanks thanks thanks
It’s me again. So here are my thumbnails. I’ll admit I made these thumbnails with the more humanistic tortoise in mind. But I will take what you suggested in mind and see how I can apply that to these thumbnails. Or I’ll just make more!
If you can’t read my chicken scratch feel free to bug me. Otherwise I’ll see you tomorrow.
P.S: I’ll go look up even more references for my hare. Thanks for the suggestions!
Character Design 1: The Hare
Character Design 2a: The Tortoise
Character Design 2b: The Tortoise
I’m stuck between which version of character design 2 I want to do. So if you can help me out feel free. Other than that enjoy my character designs! Thumbnails coming soon.
I’m back again. So I fixed up the character designs. I know it’s a little late but I added another facial expression for the Tortoise and I tried to tweak up the Hare. Enjoy! Concept sketches coming soon.
The Hare Tortoise Facial Expressions
Here is my proposal for project 4, the handout said I was suppose to post it so here it is!
Story: Tortoise and the Hare Author: Aesop
- The setting will be on a modern day race track
- The main story will be similar to the original story: The only minor adjustments that will be placed are how the hare “sleeps”. He will be sleeping in his car dreaming about his next sponsorship. (I imagined the dialogue like this: Hey tortoise. Your car has no sponsors. You see all those brands on my car? That proves I’m better… *While he’s sleeping* Green Giant… Sponsor me… Please…)
- Audience: Children
Change: Genre – Horror
- The setting will be in a haunted forest near the village. (village will be where the beginning challenge sequence occurs)
- The story will be similar to the original story. When the rabbit decides to sleep spirits gather around him and abduct him into the *dramatic voice* SHADOW REALM (I’m joking). But the haunted spirits will abduct the hare and the tortoise the new found champ, everybody doesn’t notice where the hare went.
- Audience: Young Adult
If you want to know more, or hear me say “Shadow Realm” in my dramatic voice you can ask me in class. Thanks!
I wasn’t happy with my final pencil so I redrew it. I adjusted the entire “game” layout and I included my thumbs. The thumbs are “swiping” and “turning” the dog. And, since it’s going to be a print I thought about how people hold a magazine (at least how I hold a magazine to look at the cover) and if you can get your hands on the magazine you can place your thumbs where my drawn thumbs are and it will feel like you are holding the controls on customizing this dog.
Considering that I had to explain it that probably means it has some flaws. Can you please tell me any revisions or tweaks I should make?
These are my thumbnails. Starred are the ones I want to delve further into. Feel free to critique.