Good work getting these drawn ealy, however, you never got any feedback on your thumbnails. Re READ the assignment details. The proportions of the image should be for a MAGAZINE COVER- so a Vertical composition. Also it is not obvious how these 2 drawings are connected with your subject matter. I see a very sad girl in one and fruit in the other. WHat are you trying to say in each drawing?
Tyley-
Good work getting these drawn ealy, however, you never got any feedback on your thumbnails. Re READ the assignment details. The proportions of the image should be for a MAGAZINE COVER- so a Vertical composition. Also it is not obvious how these 2 drawings are connected with your subject matter. I see a very sad girl in one and fruit in the other. WHat are you trying to say in each drawing?