Essay 1 Pre-Draft: Thesis Paragraph

Is happiness a factor of how we really should be or how society thinks people should be and act? Happiness is not only brought through experiences but also experiences of other people. When you give to other people you share happiness with them and yourself. But also with happiness comes suffering as was stated in the article “What Suffering Does” by David Brook he states that “Often, physical or social suffering can give people an outsider’s perspective, an attuned awareness of what other outsiders are enduring”. Through suffering you get to reveal more and more stuff about yourself. Happiness is really brought by sharing with others in your experiences and relating to others to share that happiness and well-being.