The OpenLab at City Tech:A place to learn, work, and share
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
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Hi Kayla,
I had the printout of this for you, but you weren’t in class when I handed it back. In short: You don’t make any glaring punctuation errors here, but I see that you could benefit from some exercises in that area.
I really like what you wrote! The image of the trees — you used a strange word but it came out quite poetic!