Write one or two paragraphs in which you describe your avatar well enough that your readers need not look at it to know what it looks like, call attention to specific details in the image, and explain how the image represents you, specifically the you you’re representing in the interview.
About your partner’s draft:
what do you understand?
What do you want to know more about?
What would you add? remove?
What would you mod/steal/use for yourself?