You only live once thus you need to break off from your everyday routine and do new things every day, try new things, see new things. Enjoy life for what life is. And with this app it does just that. This app takes you away from your everyday boring walk to school and leads you in a new walk that will excite you and appreciate the way our planet really is.
Today’s new walking route will start from Hoyt – Schermerhorn, Brooklyn, NY, United States, and lead you to your destination at City Tech.
Instead of getting off the train at Jay Street MetroTech Station and walk for about 3 minutes to reach city tech, let’s take a new route and see the beauty around the City Tech Community. This new route will only take you about 16 minutes, 13 minutes more than your usual walk to school. The sense of this walk is to see beauty around us. Your new route will start from Hoyt – Schermerhorn train station, one stop before Jay Street MetroTech Station. Once you come out of the station, you will have to;
Head southeast on Schermerhorn Street toward Bond Street.
Then turn left onto Nevins Street.
Then turn left onto Flatbush Ave.
Then a slight Left onto Fulton Street.
Then turn right onto Bridge Street.
Then turn left towards Jay Street.
Then Turn right onto Jay Street.
Walk straight until you see City Tech.
While on this new route you will see so many beautiful things you have never seen or even know about. This walk will worth your wild. This description will not tell you what you will see, therefore you will have to see it for yourself in person for the first time. Nothing beats seeing something right in front of you rather than seeing it on a screen first.
However some locations you will see are below.
I want to use your app, I like how much time it will take me to to the location. It is not that long but not too short either. However the Professor mentioned in the instruction to add images. Other than, that good work! Remember to count the words, minimum is 300 words~
What is the theme of this walk? You say that the user will see new things, but how do you know these will be new to the user? And once the users takes the walk, will they stop using the app, because the route is no longer new?
The route should highlight what the user would see. If someone is choosing to invest time and effort, they should have some sense of what the route will offer.
I did not see the theme in your draft is it beauty, relaxation, fun I don’t know so try and add that but the opening of your draft is great love the way you introduced the app.