This draft is incomplete, but I was wondering if I was going in the right direction first before continuing. Thank you!
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Fatma,
Thanks for your draft. Yes, there is much to admire in this draft. The comparison of these two characters and these terms are apt. I think, also, the idea of the cycle that you mention briefly is a compelling idea. How do they rise and fall? What scenes are similar in their actions and results? Does the “experiment” of perverseness lead them to directly to death? To the CGI? Is the end result a paradox in seeking limits? A strong beginning here!
-Prof. Scanlan