Revision With added Dialogue

As Angelica misses her train stop she decides to walk to her destination

From a distance hears a jazz band play, and she heads that direction.

As she gets near.

A man tips the band and says

“Good job!”

One of the musicians reply back saying 

“Thank you so much have a good day”

Angelica gets closer to the end of the block and waits as she sees cars passing by.

Angelica proceeds takes her phone out and looks down to view a message

Its a message from a friend

Kiara: “Did you see the Citizen app update?”

Angelica hears multiple voices ahead of her, she looks up to see 3 girls talking.

Girl #1: “We can order Chipolte and take it back to my place”

Girl #2: “That’s a better option”

Girl #3: “Okay that’s good too”

Their voices fade away as it was time to cross the street

Angelica is reminded of her friends, wishing she can see them.