While writing the new short story I came into a lot of thinking and trying my best to become very creative with the topic that was given to us. There is for sure a lot of work that still needs to be done in order for it to be perfect. Comparing my story to the stories of my peers I began to think that I can use a lot of more effort on improving my skills to make the story more mature and more creative for it to be interesting to read. The barrier of my creativity stopped me from making the story as creative as I really wanted. But fortunately I can improve my skills over time as I keep on practicing the skill of detailed and creative writing. So, the process of writing and rewriting would help a lot to notice the struggles each of the students have, and improve on what they have now.