Prof. Jessica Penner | D463 | Spring 2022

Gundo Sillah, Final Reflection, 1st Draft

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  1. Behlul

    I really enjoyed how she started it off with the quote. It felt like dialogue from a movie. While I was reading it I kept on thinking wow she’s a professional and talks about it just how a writer would.

    One interesting thing was that she said her process was difficult and she can write but she wants more than that. She wants to be challenged while writing and accomplish something. I see a lot of passion in that.

    I noticed the author mentioning how this class made her more careful while reading and how they can see the point of view of different characters. This is important because I think it’s a factor to think critically. I also feel like whenever there is a class discussion about a piece of writing this definitely helps. This can definitely help with other classes.

    Honestly I have no suggestions to make this doesn’t even feel like a draft. I’d say it’s already at the level of being a Final draft. It’s well put and meets all the criteria.

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