ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 MW
A City Tech OpenLab Course Site
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
I enjoyed both viewing your website and reading about the process behind it; it was good to see how you began to view the assignment differently and threw yourself into the project! I feel you really embraced the goal of U3. The links and quotes you used in the website were very informative, since I’m a novice about the sneakerhead world. Bravo!
The suggestions I have for the website are ones you’ve already thought of in your essay, so I won’t bother with that. The essay is nicely done, although I’d suggest you think of ways to introduce each topic so the reader knows what you’re discussing (without using the questions).
100 points (out of 100)!