After reading my peer’s comments about my draft, I feel successful for doing a good job. I wanted them to understand who I am, what I want to do , and why am I here. They have said that i included everything that they needed to understand about me, and about my art. I really don’t know what else to write, but I want to thank those who comment on my Draft, and hope that they enjoyed reading a little about me, and what I love to do !