This is my finished work my mood is anger and I think iv achieved the contrast well and my gray scale looks okay but I’m not to sure if the focal point is clear my original focal point is the mouth but it gets confused with the right eye iv fixed it and hope it looks better
I admire your composition because how your sketch coincides with your grayscale. My eyes has lead me to your teeth which makes me believe that is your focal point. In movement, I am going to go with your eyes since it is lifted from the desired spot on your face and there is more than the normal. Great sketch overall.