Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative–Travis

After reading Professor Wu’s feedback on my Narrative Essay, I would like to revise all the key points she told me to fix. I’ll work on making a better title and adding more scenes, dialogue, and CDS. I’ll be needing to add the names of my teacher/classmates that I left out also. I’ll try making improvements on everything overall. I also plan to go to a tutor after I fix everything up and get additional help.

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