Rab Proposal paragraph (Updated) esha

My research question is: How did corona virus impact education? This topic interests me because covid made me go to remote learning which I never liked. It made my mental health go very bad. It made me not want to learn anymore .Also my knowledge decreased, their was internet connection problems and it was very hard for me to do remote learning.. (good solid explanation, should be personal– 3 more sentences)  I already know that covid affected students development. School had to be shut down and students were unable to attend school. Also students had to lose alot of stuff like jobs, interships and much more.  (3 more sentences). Some points that I plan to explore and find out more about are what were the benefits of online learning? Do students want to go back online? And how does covid affect mental health. Also I wanna find out what the covid pandemic taught us? (3 points).

MLA citations

https://www.nytimes.com/2022/11/28/briefing/pandemic-learning-loss.html

https://www.nytimes.com/2021/07/28/us/covid-schools-at-home-learning-study.html

3 thoughts on “Rab Proposal paragraph (Updated) esha”

  1. Sharing a few more possible sources:

    https://www.nytimes.com/2023/01/30/health/covid-education-children.html

    https://www.nytimes.com/2022/09/01/us/national-test-scores-math-reading-pandemic.html

    https://www.nytimes.com/2022/05/05/briefing/school-closures-covid-learning-loss.html

    Many of these articles are about learning loss. This is a big subtopic under education, so make sure you add this aspect into your Proposal Paragraph: Some of the topics I want to explore are how did the pandemic contribute to student learning loss. Infact much of your research will probably be about learning loss.

    This is a very important topic. I am glad you chose this RQ!

    Could your RQ be — How are schools going to solve/address the student learning loss that happened in the pandemic?

  2. Please edit this Proposal and fix words like “wanna” “stuff”

    You write:It made my mental health go very bad. It made me not want to learn anymore .Also my knowledge decreased, their was internet connection problems and it was very hard for me to do remote learning.

    Here is how I would edit: The pandemic caused my mental health to decline. I did not want to learn and the knowledge I already had in [WHAT SUBJECTS>] was slipping away. There (not their!) was internet connection problems in my apartment and it was hard to do remote learning.

    NOW go on and edit all of this Proposal.

    Please go to work with the Writing Tutors.

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