Analysis of Student Example – Jhan Pesantez

I’m writing about Bithiah‘s Ed Narrative

1. The writer effectively conveys their personal journey of adaptation and growth. By sharing their initial struggles and how they overcame them, they create a relatable narrative.
2. I like the use of vivid imagery and detailed descriptions helps to paint a clear picture of the setting and experiences. For example, the descriptions of the volleyball court and the interactions with teammates bring the scenes to life.
3. The use of dialogue, particularly between the narrator and characters like Mr. Dozie and Maxine, adds depth and authenticity to the narrative. It helps to break up the text and allows me to connect with the characters on a more personal level.