I’ve reviewed and commented on Yuliana’s submission. The notes don’t even breach proofreading or editing. I’m going to be meeting with her today and am planning to direct her away from the assignment response format into something more publishable. To that end I made some notes on her submission. I’m adding my notes and review into the “documents” section here so that you all can take a look at what I’m doing in case one of you will take up the next step, you’ll see what came before, and I think that’s how we should approach it going forward.