Originally the lighting in this photo was really dark, I edited it in lightroom to set a specific tone. Out of all I like this photo because I had trouble with lighting and focus so all of my pictures came out super dark or blurry. This picture was taken in our classroom by the windows I tried to do the do’s and do not’s while taking her portraits.
Your composition here is nice. You filled the frame with your subject while not cutting off areas that might make her look awkward. Lighting is definitely tricky indoors, making this assignment maybe more difficult than it would have been outside. But that’s why we keep practicing, to get better!