Professor Kate Poirier | D772 | Spring 2023

Project# 3 Draft

By: Danny Mizhquiri


  1. Rubab Tariq

    This draft was written by you, I like you explain very nicely and mention where the information came from like the pictures and graphs that you put in your draft to make us understand better. The only thing you just work a little more to summarize some of the information into short paragraphs.

  2. Juan Giraldo

    This is a very detailed project, and I think you chose option A because of the way it was written. You gave us a ton of information as well as graphs. This is phenomenal because it helps the reader visualize the points you’re making. For me, I think it’s good to go as it is for the final draft, but there is always room for improvement like if that is what you decide to do.

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