HUS 1203, Fall 2017

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    Leo
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    Leonardo Sartorio
    12121 76TH ST
    Howard Beach, NY 11414
    Day Phone: 929-215-1234
    Email: leo.sartorio@gmail.com
    Hello my name is Leonardo Sartorio. I am an experience Wheeled Vehicle Mechanic. I am a Sergeant for the US Army. My goal is to expand my experience and work for you.

    Education:
    New York City College of Technology Brooklyn, NY United States
    Some College Coursework Completed
    Credits Earned: 100 Semester hours
    Major: Human Services
    Expected Graduation: 2020

    UMUC Adelphi, MD United States
    Some College Coursework Completed
    Credits Earned: 49 Semester hours
    Major: General Studies

    Work Experience:
    U.S Army Reserve 237 Maintenance Co
    203 Totten Ave
    Fort Totten. NY 11359
    12/2016 – Present
    Wheeled Vehicle Mechanic
    Duties, Accomplishments and Related Skills:
    Primarily responsible for supervising and performing maintenance and recovery operations on wheeled vehicles and associated items, as well as heavy-wheeled vehicles and select armored vehicles.

    U.S. Army 7th Army JMTC HHC OMA
    Unit 28130
    APO, AE 09114 United States
    05/2013 – 12/2016
    Wheeled Vehicle Mechanic
    Duties, Accomplishments and Related Skills:
    Primarily responsible for supervising and performing maintenance and recovery operations on wheeled vehicles and associated items, as well as heavy-wheeled vehicles and select armored vehicles.

    Russos on the Bay
    162-45 Cross Bay Blvd
    Howard Beach, NY 11414 United States
    08/2012 – 01/2013
    Doorman
    Duties, Accomplishments and Related Skills:
    Duties usually include opening doors as guests arrived or departed the facility. Also have gates to open or intercoms to answer as guests arrive. Be friendly, smile, and greets people because this enhances a guest’s or resident’s overall experience.

    Skills:
    ​Fluent in English and Spanish
    Certifications
    ​H8 Recovery for wheeled vehicles
    ​Basic Leadership Course

    Awards:
    ​2x Army Commendation Medal
    ​3x Army Achievement Medal
    ​Army Good Conduct Medal
    ​National Defense Service Medal
    ​Global War on Terrorism Service Medal
    ​Non Commissioned Officer Professional Development Ribbon
    ​Army Service Ribbon
    ​Overseas Ribbon
    ​Expert Rifleman’s Badge

    #45856

    Dr. Abdur-Rahman
    Participant

    nice overall. obj. needs to be revised- state what you hope to accomplish from the position you are seeking. some of the info. listed can be cut down including “Duties, Accomplishments and Related Skills;”. do not write paragraphs of experience, bullet what you did instead. need a colon after certifications. also there are some grammar issues that need to be corrected.

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