English 1121 Journey

Introduction: 3 Subtopics and thesis

  • weight loss struggle
  • self-esteem issues
  • health issues

Paragraph One: Weight Loss Struggle

  • The depression during weight loss struggle
  • Positive things people do to lose weight
  • Negative things people to lose weight
  • Anorexia due to poor eating to lose weight

Transition: “because of weight loss struggles, people deal with a good and a bad self-esteem.

Paragraph Two: Self -Esteem

  • New goals to make their life better (eating better, work out)
  • Suicide thoughts
  • Eating disorders
  • Graph on what age should be what weight

Transition: “Many people go through a hard time when they cant reach their goal to lose weight and sometimes then try to lose weight the wrong way, which can cause health issues.”

Paragraph Three: Health Issues

  • Bad eating habits
  • Fasting
  • How many people were affected in the last 4 years by bad eating habits?

Transition: “Many people have health issues but some people know how to deal with their weight, and some people do know how to handle it, making obesity even a bigger issue than just unhealthy eating.”

Conclusion: Weight Loss, Self-Esteem, Health Issues

  • My opinion about weight loss and eating bad
  • Using my interviewers words to describe that difficulty of not being the weight you would like to be.

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