Introduction: 3 Subtopics and thesis
- weight loss struggle
- self-esteem issues
- health issues
Paragraph One: Weight Loss Struggle
- The depression during weight loss struggle
- Positive things people do to lose weight
- Negative things people to lose weight
- Anorexia due to poor eating to lose weight
Transition: “because of weight loss struggles, people deal with a good and a bad self-esteem.
Paragraph Two: Self -Esteem
- New goals to make their life better (eating better, work out)
- Suicide thoughts
- Eating disorders
- Graph on what age should be what weight
Transition: “Many people go through a hard time when they cant reach their goal to lose weight and sometimes then try to lose weight the wrong way, which can cause health issues.”
Paragraph Three: Health Issues
- Bad eating habits
- Fasting
- How many people were affected in the last 4 years by bad eating habits?
Transition: “Many people have health issues but some people know how to deal with their weight, and some people do know how to handle it, making obesity even a bigger issue than just unhealthy eating.”
Conclusion: Weight Loss, Self-Esteem, Health Issues
- My opinion about weight loss and eating bad
- Using my interviewers words to describe that difficulty of not being the weight you would like to be.
