ENG1141-D310 Intro to Creative Writing, SP2024

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  • Discussion Board 2: Free Verse (and Line Breaks)
  • #92460

    Jennifer Sears
    Participant
    #92471

    Selina Myrtil
    Participant

    Title : no one said anything…

    To prevent making her feel

    bad.

    so we kept our mouths

    shut

    all through middle school

    and

    kept our distance

    #92473

    Jennifer Sears
    Participant

    For Brandon:

    THE DINING SLICE

    I wanted to tell

    my friend

    his girlfriend

    was cheating on him.

     

    It ate at me

    after t hat day

    of pretending

    that things were ok

    I felt terrible

    #92477

    Amged
    Participant

    Misunderstanding:

    I had found out one of my best friends girl

    on a date with another man

    so I snuck a flick so I could show him

    the next time I saw him.

    I couldn’t find the right words to get ready to comfort him

    so I just showed him the picture,

    He just laughed in my face

    and told me it was her brother.

    • This reply was modified 4 months, 2 weeks ago by Amged.
    #92480

    Hesler Garcia
    Participant

    The Memory

    I also remember

    the one vein that always popped out on your forehead

    and the one single curl that always fell perfectly against it

     

    they told me time heals

    but all it did was replaces old memories

    I will soon forget your smile

    and you’ll forget mine

     

    • This reply was modified 4 months, 2 weeks ago by Hesler Garcia.
    #92485

    xitlalyrojas1
    Participant

    A Diffrent Path

    I wanted to go down

    a diffrent path

     

    I didn’t want them to think to think I didnt know what I was doing

    Truth is I didn’t

    #92540

    mhia
    Participant

    MY GEM

    It’s really hard to believe the facts that our life is not permanent .

    Moms are really a special gem.

     

    i love my mother

    Special

    Shes so special man

    Makes me wish life was permanent

    never admired a gem

    till i knew she was my special gem

    #92581

    oussmane
    Participant

    They

    were clearly racist.

    I didn’t tell my mother,

    she was too happy for me.

    #92586

    Eshal
    Participant

    Regret

    I felt my heart drop

    to my stomach

    I knew my score wouldn’t

    please them

     

    The yelling made me feel worse

    I felt embarrassed

    and disappointed

    in myself and made

    me eventually

    break

     

    #92619

    Ayesha
    Participant

    Lost in my thoughts… 

    I felt hesitant

    I felt like if I

    Kept it in my

    head

    it would only exist

    there.

    #92621

    Afia
    Participant

    We think love is everything,

    So we always run for it.

    It sounds easy but very delicate to handle,

    Sometimes it’s better to let go instead of suffering.

    Love yourself first,

    Entire world will love you anyway.

    #92622

    Afia
    Participant

    Love yourself

    We think love is everything,

    So we always run for it .

    It sounds easy, but very delicate to handle,

    Sometimes instead of suffer, it’s better to let go.

    Because if you love yourself first,

    The entire world will love you anyway.

    #92625

    sophia
    Participant

    Title-The secret

    Though I was very happy

    I also was scared

    I put off telling her for weeks

    although I was nervous

    time was running out

    I could not put off telling her for months

    maybe it’ll never be over

    ill put off not telling her for years

     

     

    #92663

    jamescobo
    Participant

    Love is a feeling we all have

    but not that we all receive

    Sometimes its forgotten

    Its simple but complicated

    Dont chase it wait for it

    #92703

    Jennifer Sears
    Participant

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