Nancy Lema
Dear professor Garcia,
I could say my progress as I’ve been writing my education narrative helped me learn a lot about myself. Including the many self-reflective responses I’ve written in class helped me realize that I’m good at writing a lot, meaning as I’m writing a lot of flowing ideas rush through my head that its often hard to stop writing. In my narrative I wrote about an experience that taught me a lot about who I am today, but as any writer having to revise your work and make sure the story flows is a lot of work when all your ideas are constantly rushing out your head and you type every thought that comes to your mind, this taught me that writing takes a lot of patience. In the end considering the organization and structure of my essay I think my essay deserves a good grade based on the grading criteria. What I would like to work in further when I revise is adding bigger vocabulary to my essays because I often find myself repeating words that could be replaced with other words to help my essay flow better.
Sincerely,
Nancy Lema
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