Prof. Garcia | ENG1101-HD57 | Fall 2022

UNIT 1 DRAFT

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10N1tbR0ivrxmHWUqtuq3MkM4aQ_4yXZ1703ZxqCEsW8/edit?usp=sharing

5 Comments

  1. Ruth Garcia

    Notice how I edited your post so that the link is in the body of the post. If you have a grey box, you did put the information in the incorrect place.

  2. Ruth Garcia

    Please change the settings so that anyone with the link can edit.

  3. Ruth Garcia

    Please change the settings so that anyone with the link can edit. I still can’t comment.

  4. Ruth Garcia

    Since I can not comment, here are my thoughts:

    This has the potential to be an inspiring story. Right now though it is more of a free write because it lacks an organization. You might start by explaining to the reader your condition and then go on to say how you became aware of it and how it made you feel. Maybe tell the story of a particular time when you were made to feel inadequate and how this affected you. Then tell of how you moved beyond these feelings to embrace yourself as you are. This is just one possible organization. But right it is hard to follow the story you are telling.

  5. Arrianna

    how do i change the setting for the comments ?

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