First Round 
Reshoot after suggestions 
Reshoot with color edits
I tried to tell a story of restlessness in this motion blur filled photo.
For the reshoot I ended up focusing more on framing my bed more directly without the distracting objects in the background. I also tried to create more contrast and brighten the image by removing the paper filter from my clamp light.
For my final picture I edited the colors to make them cooler and bring my wall to a more natural looking white.
Nice work. Bringing the center of gravity up filled the frame more effectively.
Learning how to look at your work and see what is good and what you can improve is one of the most important skills you can have as a photographer.