Student Videos and Screenplays

Below, all the great stories that students came up with.

Read all the screenplays and watch the incredible videos. Everyone needs to comment at the bottom of the post.
As we saw on the video about The Art of Storytelling, giving feedback is part of the process. Your comments have to be constructive and develop ideas. Suggest adjustments if you see something that could be added or tweaked that could help make the story better. This is part of your participation grades. You need to write at least a comment on 2 different stories.

1. TITLE: Eddie By Eddie
By Eddie Altamirano

A day of my life capturing the different things I do, places I like and showing my artwork. A sort of interview with a creative touch.

SCENE 1

Location: in the bedroom

Audio: Alarm ringing 

Action: Silhouette of me getting up from my bed and walking towards the camera.

SCENE 2

Locations: in the bedroom, and a series of New York city views.

Action: Walking back to sit on the bed, starts to talk.

Fade out to New York view with voiceOver of me.

VoiceOver: Hello, my name is Eduardo and I’m from Brooklyn New York.

SCENE 3

Location: In the bedroom and streets. 

Action: me walking taking pictures. 

VoiceOver: talking about what I like to do.

THE END

2. TITLE: Jennifer’s World
by Jennifer Bocanegra

Jennifer’s favorite activities, places and objects.

SCENE 1

Location: Jennifer’s bedroom

Camera: view of the wall with polaroids of a dog named Dorey, some art and posters. The camera is ending on Jennifer laying on her bed.

Action: Jennifer daydreaming with figurines she collects and objects from Mexico.

SCENE 2

Location : Jennifer’s living room

Action: Jennifer shows her sketchbook with drawings inside.

SCENE 3

Location : Jennifer’s front yard

Action: Jennifer introduces her dog, Dorey. They get ready for their walk around the neighborhood following their favorite route.

SCENE 4

Location : in the street

Action: Jennifer and Dorey in front of murals Jennifer likes.

SCENE 5

Location: in the street in front of the house walking back home.

action : Dorey in the yard with the clouds in the sky

THE END
“Jennifer’s World” storyboard

3. TITLE: Journal
By Mia Calixto

A day of my life capturing things I love, places and my thoughts.

SCENE 1

Locations: Series of views of Kings Highway.

Subtitle: I was born in Kings Highway and lived here since. 

Music 

SCENE 2

Location: B and Q train station 

Action: Wide shot of the train station + Close up of people passing by.

Subtitle: I live right by the train station and even though it gets loud and busy, I’ve learned to enjoy the sound. My block always looks so beautiful throughout the day.

Music

SCENE 3

Location: My desk and its surrounding

Action:  Close up of objects and my cat laying on my desk

Subtitle: When it is not cluttered, my cat likes to lay on my desk 🙂 

Music Will be lowered a little I want to hear the natural sound of my area

SCENE 4 

Location: Outside 

Action: My pottery in the sun

VoiceOver: I never expected to love ceramics, but I’ve grown to have such a passion for clay. Creating handmade pieces brings me so much happiness.

SCENE 5

Location: in my favorite park

Action: the sky and the park

Subtitle: My peaceful park

SCENE 6

Location: My sketch book

Action: Me going through my sketch book 

Subtitle: Natural sound 

SCENE 7

Location: A grass field in the park

Camera: Me laying on the grass looking at the sky, smiling.

Subtitle: My life has been pretty good so far!

THE END
Journal” storyboard

4. TITLE: CHANTAL
by Chantal Gomez

The video is about a day spent with Chantal. Scenes show her favorite places and activities. Graphic elements are scattered throughout the screen with random facts about her.

SCENE 1

Location: Chantal’s bedroom

Action: Chantal is showing to the camera her name written on a piece of paper.

Camera: bird’s eye view showing her personal items laid down on her desk, polaroid pictures, a vinyl, a hat, a cereal box, etc.

SCENE 2

Location: Chantal’s rooftop

Action: Chantal opens door to her roof top, telling the camera to “shhh” while showing the no trespassing sign. Chantal is showing to the camera the view of New York. 

Onscreen Graphics: I love New York

SCENE 3

Location: At a store

Action: Chantal is shopping with a friend showing off the outfits they bought. 

SCENE 4

Location: Taco Bell or pizza place

Action: Chantal is getting something to eat.

SCENE 5

Location: Chantal’s rooftop

Action: sunset view

THE END

5. TITLE: CHAPTER 
By Dereck Henriquez 

This video is about the two things that’s I’m most passionate about, dancing and modeling.

SCENE 1 

Location: in a park in the city 

Action: me walking around 

VoiceOver: hey, my name is Dereck, I like modeling and dancing because in makes me feel empowered and happy.

SCENE 2

Location: in a park in the city 

Action: posing in front of the camera simulating a fashion photoshoot

SCENE 3

fading out to black 

VoiceOver: Stop!

Music starts 

SCENE 4

Location: in front of wall with graffitis

Action: walking towards the camera 

SCENE 5 

Location: in front of wall with graffitis

Action: dancing 

THE END

6. TITLE: The Multiple “Me’s” that make Me 
By Jasmin Hernandez

A day of my life capturing the multiple things I enjoy doing that make who I am.

Background music playing throughout the whole video.

Intro VoiceOver: All these things define who I am and what my passions are. From my point of view, I think I’m a pretty special me. 

SCENE 1

Location: outside of my house 

Action: me getting ready for a ride, grabbing my headphones, putting on my mini backpack and of course my skateboard. 

Camera: on my objects, the skateboard, backpack , headphones, then goes back to me. 

SCENE 2

Location: a park nearby 

Action: me riding my skateboard. 

Camera: follows me around 

SCENE 3

Location: At a nearby McDonald’s or Dunkin Donut’s 

Action: Me getting my daily iced coffee

SCENE 4

Location: at multiple stores 

Action: me searching for clothes, backpacks, heels, notebooks, pens, etc. 

Camera: on the different objects and going back to me 

SCENE 5

Location: on the streets 

Action: walking back home looking tired 

SCENE 6

Location: in my bedroom 

Action: sitting at my desk, reading and writing 

Camera: backs away slowly and fades out into black  

THE END 

7. TITLE: Vision
By Aiah Kassim

This is a video a bit about myself, showing what I love, and what I aspire to become. 

SCENE 1

Location: Aiah’s neighborhood

Action: Aiah walking on the streets of her neighborhood, showing around proudly.

Aiah: Hey everyone, I’m Aiah. I love art and photography. 

SCENE 2

Action: Slideshow of my art.

VoiceOver: these are my photographs. I’ve always been the type of person who randomly stops to take pictures of what captivates my attention. I am also the kid who would always get in trouble for drawing in class. Empty pages were more interesting than anything my geometry teacher taught me - no offense to geometry or the teachers. 

SCENE 3

Action: Slideshow of Heylenne’s art.

VoiceOver: Anyway, I really love the art of the rising artist Heylenne and admire her style. Her work has inspired me to want to become a graphic novelist.

SCENE 5

Action: a picture of my sister and I.

VoiceOver: My sister - she is a writer - and I plan on collaborating to put our work out there one day. But my first and main priority for now is to achieve financial stability and equanimity. 
THE END

8. TITLE: Business Shutdown
by Rahel Lehar

I want to film the stores that were and are still shut down due to Covid-19 and the looting.

SCENE 1

Filming outside

action: my general pov when i’m walking through my neighborhood

Background music 

SCENE 2

action: closer shots of stores out of business

subtitle: These are some businesses in my neighborhood that have closed permanently due to the lockdown along with riots and looting.

Background music

SCENE 3

include social media and news clips of people rioting, looting, & of people who were badly affected.

SCENE 4

Action : show “for rent” signs and signs about covid 19 rules.

Background music

THE END

9. TITLE: Me, Myself And I
by Israel Martinez

The video is showing with humor my somewhat arrogant personality, but revealing the opposite at the same time. With satirical elements the spectator is able to perceive details in the back of the scene that discretely reveal the truth about who I really am.

SCENE 1

Location: in the living room 

Camera: me seated, staring straight at the camera looking strong.

Front action: I introduce myself, my nickname, hobbies etc.

Back action: on the wall an old photo framed, of me when I was 6 years old, looking like an angel.

SCENE 2

Location: in the bedroom 

Front action: me going under my bed to reach for a pair of sneakers, explaining why they are my favorite and how much I had to give up for them.

Back action: on the floor, next to the bed, a pile of old and warned out sneakers.

SCENE 3

Location: at my desk

Front action: Showing off my favorite things nicely put together on my desk.

Back action: under the desk you can see a mess of old stuff.

SCENE 4

Location: in the park 

Front action: me showing off with my bicycle in front of the camera.

Back action: there is a broken bicycle on the floor behind me.

THE END

10. TITLE: Journal
By Mahir Meah

SCENE 1

Location: Midtown Manhattan

Action: views of skyscrapers 

VoiceOver: me talking about my life, growing up 

SCENE 2

Location: a neighborhood in Queens

Action: view of the ocean near the beach area.

VoiceOver: me talking about what I’m passionate about

SCENE 3

Location: Downtown Brooklyn

Action: views of the Brooklyn Bridge Park  

VoiceOver: me talking about my future goals

THE END

11. TITLE: Doubts 
By Yessica Ramirez

VoiceOver: Yessica saying: “I am very critical about myself, sometimes a little too much. My accomplishments never seem to be good enough, I always have doubts. I believe that being so self-critical motivates me even more and proves that I am a strong willed person. But is it true?”

SCENE 1

Location: Yessica’s bed.

Action:  Yessica is laying in her bed and scrolling on Instagram.

Camera: close-up on the screen showing make-up looks. Camera on Yessica’s face looking exited. She gets out of bed and walks over to her vanity.

SCENE 2

Location: Yessica’s vanityAction: She looks at herself in the mirror looks back at the reference photo and then looks back at herself in the mirror again and says, “I got this!”

SCENE 3

Action: several clips of Yessica attempting to do her make-up. Every time she attempts she gets frustrated because she does not like the way it looks.

SCENE 4

Location: Yessica’s bedroom the next day.

Action: Yessica is sitting at her vanity and looks at the photo again. She keeps trying. 

SCENE 5

Action: Yessica puts down the brush, she finished her make-up. Close up on Yessica’s face with a great make-up on. She looks satisfied.

Music: very uplifting giving a sense of accomplishment.

SCENE 6

Action: Yessica is staring at herself  and the longer she stares the more she nitpicks at her work. She gets frustrated again.

Music: dark giving a sense of dissatisfaction.

SCENE 7

Action: Yessica harshly removes her makeup and says “Well, I am tired now.” She looks highly dissatisfied.  Fade out to black.

THE END

12. TITLE: DAY IN MY LIFE
Esmeralda Reyes

SCENE 1

Location: in my bedroom

Action: I am awoken by an alarm clock. I sigh because I am tired.

Subtitle: 8am – Wishing I can sleep for longer

SCENE 2

Location: In the living room

Action: Putting away toys. Showing that my back hurts

Subtitle: 12pm – I am getting ready to play with my nephews

SCENE 3

Location: In my bedroom and kitchen

Action: Fixing my bed, cleaning the kitchen, yawning

Subtitle: 3pm

SCENE 4

Location: outside of restaurant

Action: eating tacos, taking a bite

Subtitle: 6pm – I am enjoying my favorite food with friends

SCENE 5

Location: in my bedroom

Action : doing homework, looking stressed

Subtitle: 8pm – Crunch time

SCENE 6

Location : in my bed room

Action: jump on my bed take out my kindle, full of joy

Subtitle : 10pm – finally some ME time

THE END

13. TITLE: Cheaper to Make Them
by Destiny Staton

SCENE 1

Voiceover: All my life I have loved Walt Disney’s imagination and creativity. Entering his world has been a way for me to escape my reality when it got too tough. 

Action: video of me drawing, sewing and thinking.

SCENE 2

Voiceover: For Middle School graduation my mother and grandmother took me on a Disney Cruise and recently we went to Disney World for my High School graduation.

Action: pictures of me and my family during the Disney cruise.

SCENE 3

Voiceover: While we were there we saw many people wearing headbands called Mickey Ears. I thought about asking for one but when I saw the price tag I knew there was no way I was getting a pair. That’s when I had the idea “Hey I can do that for less with twice the fun, and sell them to friends and family.” And so I did. 

Action: video of me coming up with the idea of making my own ears, sitting at my desk.

SCENE 4

Voiceover: My ears are handmade and designed to your unique specification. All materials are hand-picked and bespoke to each customer. Items are made to order.

Action: video showing my Mickey ears and me helping people trying them on looking happy.

THE END

14. TITLE: The Happy Stage
By Kiyana Stoutt

The video is about the daily activities and adventures that make me happy. The scenes will show a list of things I do that bring me happiness. The ending will show a singular moment when I was the happiest. 

SCENE 1

Location: Living Room

Action: Narrator and Kiyana comes in and sits down with Kiyana. Narrator asks the question.

Narrator: So let's get straight to the point.
Kiyana :Okay
Narrator: When in your life are you the happiest?
Kiyana: Well, that is a good question.

Fades out to Scene 2

SCENE 2

Location: Park Picnic Area

Action: Title is above Kiyana. Kiyana lays down a picnic blanket and camera pans around the area.

Kiyana voiceover: I’m my happiest being outside in nature

Fades out to Scene 3

SCENE 3

Location: Train Station 

Action: Camera films Kiyana from across platforms as train passes.

Kiyana voiceover: I'm my happiest exploring the city and new places. 

Fades out to Scene 4

SCENE 4

Location: in the streets

Action: Camera films Kiyana from a distance. Kiyana roller skates or rides a bike towards the camera. 

Kiyana voiceover: I'm my happiest being active.

Fades out to Scene 5

SCENE 5

Location: My Room  

Action: Kiyana places the camera down. Camera shows Kiyana in her room.

Kiyana voiceover: Sometimes I’m my happiest being alone.

Fades out to Scene 6

SCENE 6

Location: Living Room

Action: Pans to Kiyana and Narrator.

Narrator: But if you were to choose one moment in your life when you were your happiest, when would it be.
Kiyana: Well, then, that would have to be a summer in the Caribbean.

Fades out to Scene 7

SCENE 7

Action: Inserted clip swimming in the Caribbean. 

THE END
“The Happy StageStoryboard

15. TITLE: “What Students Really Do During Online Class”
By Eric Sukhdeo

Under the title: Camera shows the monitor of the Zoom class.

SCENE 1

Action: Student sits down at chair and desk and logs into online class.

Eric: (Sigh) here we go, good morning professor

SCENE 2

Graphic text onscreen: TEXTING

Action: Phone screen showing professor starting the lecture and is talking in the background during the all video.

Eric: okay. He pulls out phone to text a message.

SCENE 3

Graphic text onscreen: EATING

Action: Eric Eating, stuffing face with food.

SCENE 4

Graphic text onscreen: VIDEO-GAMES

Action: Eric playing Video-games saying loudly while holding controller

Eric: DUDE HE’S GOING TO PLANT AT B, GET OVER THERE!!

SCENE 5

Graphic text onscreen: MUSIC

Action: Bet of it plays in it background. Eric shaking his head and lip syncs the song.

SCENE 6

Graphic text onscreen: SLEEP

Action; Lecture stops and professor asks if anyone has any questions. Eric asleep on the chair with a pillow and blanket.

Professor: okay class that will be it for today, Any questions? Eric?. (Eric doesn’t respond) Eric are you there?
Eric: (Eric jolts awake) What??? Yeah, I’m here professor (Eric is dazed and still half asleep)
Professor: Any questions?
Eric: Nope see you next week (Eric logs off and jumps in bed)
THE END

16. TITLE: My story
by YiQiang Wang

Voiceover: I like stories, everyone’s stories, I just don’t like my story.

SCENE 1 

Location: in my bedroom

Screen graphic: September 3, 2025

Action: I am drawing a cartoon. My phone vibrates. Close up on my phone screen showing a new message from my high school classmate. Me pensive thinking of the past. 

Fade out and in to scene 2.

SCENE 2

Location: In front of my high school entrance

Screen graphic: September 3, 2015

Action: me standing in front of the door with my schoolbag. Close up of my face feeling nervous and lonely.

Fade out and in to scene 3.

SCENE 3

Location: Graduation Ceremony

Screen graphic: June 25, 2019

Action: me happy with my new friend during the ceremonyFade out and in to scene 4.

SCENE 4

Location: inside the school after the ceremony

Action: All the classmates are leaving. I walk alone, holding a poster in my hand. Close up of me looking at the poster smiling.

Voiceover: me saying: I want to remember all my friends and tell their story. I am going to record everything in my comics and videos.

THE END

17. TITLE: Who Made Me Who I Am Today
By Zhigang Wen 

The video is about an animated character with no face, but who slowly becomes whole after responding to the question asked, with a series of images that represent his identity. 

SCENE 1 (This scene may be removed later, I have not decided yet.) 

Action: Starting with a summon circle that drawing on the ground and combine with a sound effect. 

Sound effect: The sound of using a pencil to draw on paper. 

SCENE 2 

Action: on-screen, my name, and the question: “Who made me who I am today?” 

VoiceOver: who made me who I am today? 

Background music will start. 

SCENE 3 

Action: fade in an animated character with no face is sitting in the center of the frame. 

VoiceOver: The beginning of life is like a plain white paper. But when we meet different people or things in our lives, these people and things will become different colors to fill the blank paper of our lives. And those colors made me who I am today. 

This VoiceOver will run through scene 2 and 3, and connect to the previous.

SCENE 4 

Action: a series of photos fall down from the right or left orderly. The first one is about the family, the second one is about friendship, the third one is about love. When the character absorbed the first photo, his face will emerge a smiling face. Similarly, when the character absorbed the next second and third photos, he will start to appear more detail in his body. 

During the photo falling, I will zoom in and create a pause effect to the photo to let the viewer see the detail inside of each photo.

VoiceOver: So, here are the three most important elements that create my life. 

Action: first photo zoom in

VoiceOver: my family 

Action: second photo zoom in

VoiceOver: my best friend  

Action: third photo zoom in

VoiceOver: my love 

SCENE 5 

Action: After the three important photos fell down and absorbed by that character’s body. There will still have a few photos fall down together from both sides of the frame to create a time to let me finish up my VoiceOver. 

VoiceOver: (Connect with the previous VoiceOver) And every important moment that is happened in my life. All of those things made me who I am today. 

SCENE 5 

Action: After the character absorbs all the photos, he becomes complete. He put down his hand from the knee to the side on the ground. And then, I will make a zoom-in effect in his eye until the scene turns to all black. 

SCENE 6 

Action: the black scene will start to emerge the ending graphic and the information about the music I have used in my video. 

THE END 

43 Comments

  1. Valeria Trucchia

    Here is an example of what you can write about other students pitches.

    Idea for #6. Jasmin Hernandez’s video, The Multiple “Me’s” that make Me:
    I like that she repeats the same idea twice. When the camera is showing the things around her, that represent who she is, and ending on her face. It’s a great way to describe her personality. Maybe each scene should have something similar, with the camera going around and always ending on Jasmin’s smiling face.

  2. rlehar

    #13 Eric Sukhdeo – I like how its simple and gets to the point, he shows the point of students being disengaged online compared to being productive in a real classroom

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Absolutely! But what I appreciate the most is Eric’s sense of humor. This pitch cracked me up so much. I can’t wait to see the video and have a laugh at it.

  3. rlehar

    #1 Eddie Altamirano – i like vlog style- like videos of people doing things and its relatable

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Okay, but I think stories that have a little twist in it are somewhat more interesting.

      Like Israel Martinez (#8) in “Me, Myself And I”, making fun of himself in the scene. By using humor, he describes himself as someone with a good self critical sense and appearing at the end very smart and charming.

      Or like Yessica Ramirez (#10) in “Doubts ” showing a reflection about herself being over perfectionist.

      Or Kiyana Stoutt (#13) in “The Happy Stage” reflecting on the happy moments in her life.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Okay, but I think stories that have a little twist in it are somewhat more interesting.

      Like Israel Martinez (#8) in “Me, Myself And I”, making fun of himself in the scene. By using humor, he describes himself as someone with a good self critical sense and appearing at the end very smart and charming.

      Or like Yessica Ramirez (#10) in “Doubts ” showing a reflection about herself being over perfectionist.

      Or Kiyana Stoutt (#13) in “The Happy Stage” reflecting on the happy moments in her life.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Okay, but I think stories that have a little twist in it are somewhat more interesting.

      Like Israel Martinez (#8) in “Me, Myself And I”, making fun of himself in the scene. By using humor, he describes himself as someone with a good self critical sense and appearing at the end very smart and charming.

      Or like Yessica Ramirez (#10) in “Doubts ” showing a reflection about herself being over perfectionist.

      Or Kiyana Stoutt (#13) in “The Happy Stage” reflecting on the happy moments in her life.

  4. Aiah Kassim

    #1 Eddie Altamirano’s video: I myself am a minimalist so I like how simple this is, for Scene 1 would suggest using an external light to create your silhouette, to have a better outcome.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Okay, Eddie’s pitch has good potential. You can read my thoughts on Eddie’s pitch in my reply to Rahel Lehar’s comment.
      For lighting you can also use the sun, which gives for me the best light ever. If you place yourself with the sun behind you and the camera in front (first the camera, second you, third the sun) you’ll be filming against the light You will able to have a nice silhouette then. See the link below for more details.

      8 Reasons Why You Should Photograph Against the Light

  5. Aiah Kassim

    #10 Yessica Remirez’s pitch: while reading it I felt like I could relate a lot and I think there are plenty of people who would think the same. In this way I think by expressing these emotions Yessica’s audience will enjoy this video. I think it is quite realistic in the way it ends with “Well, I am tired now” because that expresses the reality of things. I would’nt change anything I like the way it plays out, great work Yessica.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Yes Yessica self reflection is really good, she’s showing us how being a perfectionist can actually be tiring. As a spectator, I appreciate that she exposes this side of her personality, it makes us relate to her struggles and feel for her. By doing this she’s gaining our sympathy and becomes a true winner at the end.

  6. Destiny

    16. Who Made Me Who I Am Today By Zhigang Wen: I like how the video is family oriented and how it shows photos of important events in the creators life shaping them into the person we see today.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      I love Zhi’s interpretation with all the images going inside his body to shape who he’s. It’s a beautiful metaphor.

  7. Zhigang Wen

    #14 Title: “What Students Really Do During Online Class” By Eric Sukhdeo

    I really like how Sukhdeo uses his funny idea to reflect the different situation between an online class and an in-person class. When I read Sukhdeo’s pitch, it just like I’m reading my story; Is a hiding-camera placed in somewhere in my room?Haha

    • Valeria Trucchia

      YES! We all love Eric’s story because we relate to it. Everyone was in the same situation at one point. And using sense of humor is the best way to get people’s approval. So far it looks like that his pitch is everybody’s favorite.

  8. Zhigang Wen

    15. TITLE: “My story” By YiQiang Wang

    The voiceover in the beginning “I like stories, everyone’s stories, I just don’t like my story.” grabs my attention, give me a feeling of there is a meaningful story behind this voiceover. And then, when I scroll down to keep reading YiQiang’s pitch, what I thought at first is correct.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Yes, YiQiang knows how to captivate our attention, we can’t help to be moved by his story. I can’t wait to see his animation.

  9. Yessica Ramirez

    #9 Journal Mahir I really like this pitch it is very simple but gives a lot information as well. I like how each location and view that is going to be shown shows different stages in his life. I like how you end it with describing what you see in your future. I would like to know what type of music will be used. What mood are you setting? For me when I imagine it I get a very calm feeling.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      yes, Mahir’s video is all about his filming and the atmosphere he’s going to create. The story is simple enough to leave room to great images. I hope he’s going to succeed.

  10. Yessica Ramirez

    #14 “What Students Really Do During Online Class”. I like how this is something we can all relate too. Probably every college student is dealing with this right now. You give us a description of who are are by showing your day to day activities. It is not too detailed but it is broad. Also I really like the ending because I can also relate to it since I myself have dozed off and woke up to being the only one left in the meeting oops!

    • Valeria Trucchia

      We all did! That’s why Eric’s video is brilliant. Everyone can relate to it. Making fun of yourself proves a great sense of humor and a good analyze of yourself. I love this pitch.

  11. Kiyana Stoutt

    # 2 Jennifer’s World- I like how simple and minimalistic this concept is while also being information on what your favorite places and things are. I think the video will come out cool your your different scene ideas.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      Yes, and her dog used as the common thread is a great idea.

  12. Kiyana Stoutt

    #8 Journal- I love day in my life videos. This pitch seems to have a complete and interesting follow a day in her life. I think the idea of having subtitles instead of a voiceover or a narrator working really well with this idea. The pitch sketch makes it easy to understand how you plan on executing your idea. Great Pitch!

    • Valeria Trucchia

      I believe you’re talking about #3 Journal By Mia Calixto.
      Mia’s story is visually very well put together. I love that she includes the sound of the subway, makes it into something positive and actually beautiful. Her storyboard (that’s how you call a pitch sketch, if you watched the video about storyboard) is brilliant, it helps us see how she’s going to develop her ideas. Her last scene with her smiling face laying on the grass is so wonderful.

  13. Destiny

    4. CHANTAL by Chantal Gomez: I think Chantal’s is very creative in showing the world through her eye in a day. It allows us to get a sense of who she is as a person and it also allows us to see different sides of her through different activities.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      And I love when she says “ssshhh!” It’s like she’s share her secret with us.

  14. YiQiang Wang

    #14. TITLE: “What Students Really Do During Online Class”
    By Eric sukhdeo – I like this pitch because it’s so real that it resonates with us and reminds us of our online class.

  15. Eric Sukhdeo

    7. TITLE: Vision By Aiah Kassim
    I like how you are going to make the video personal, and describe your inspirations and mention your work so we can learn more about you.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      And how she’s using a slideshow to show her work, with no video, smart and simple.

  16. rlehar

    7. Vision By Aiah Kassim
    I love the transitions between each of her clips and the music

  17. rlehar

    15. TITLE: “What Students Really Do During Online Class”
    By Eric Sukhdeo
    I can’t stop laughing, all the scenarios are completely related
    My favorite line is when the teacher says “my wife and i are getting a divorce”. I love the lip sync singing in the shower and the music at the end which makes it a meme

  18. Mahir Meah

    #14 “What Students Really Do During Online Class”. I absolutely love Eric’s choice of comedy while describing an online learning environment. The comedic effect showcases relatability and I found myself truly invested and actually having a laugh while watching it, a bit exaggerated but it was to the point and funny as hell.

  19. Zhigang Wen

    5. TITLE: CHAPTER By Dereck Henriquez

    I really like the way Henriquez make his video, it gives me a sense of energetic.

  20. Zhigang Wen

    15. TITLE: “What Students Really Do During Online Class” By Eric Sukhdeo

    When I see the moment which Sukhdeo was singing in the shower, that makes me laugh. The video is as interesting as his pitch says.

  21. chantal gomez

    #9. TITLE: Me, Myself And I by Israel Martinez

    I really liked his video, it’s so simple and straight forward with telling who he is. From the video I saw things that I can relate and we have things in common. And it gave me a feeling that if we had actaul class, we would have probably been friends.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      I know! I love Izzy’s vide, really cool and sweet. It cracks me up how he used the bathtub as a reference to Billie Eilish’s video
      What a nice compliment to say that you would have been friends! I get it. I am sure Izzy would agree.

  22. chantal gomez

    15. TITLE: “What Students Really Do During Online Class” By Eric Sukhdeo

    I bursted out laughing when the professor said, “That’s why my wife and I or getting a divoser now.” That video was very funny and even tho the main topic wasn’t about you, I got to see who you are and how funny you are.

  23. chantal gomez

    15. TITLE: “What Students Really Do During Online Class” By Eric Sukhdeo

    I bursted out laughing when the professor said, “That’s why my wife and I or getting a divoser now.” That video was very funny and even tho the main topic wasn’t about you, I got to see who you are and how funny you are.

    • Valeria Trucchia

      I really think that we can see Eric’s personality in this video, the guy has a great sense of humor, that’s says a lot. Ahahahah!

    • Valeria Trucchia

      I really think that we can see Eric’s personality in this video, the guy has a great sense of humor, that’s says a lot. Ahahahah!

  24. Yessica

    I love Mias video Journal. I love the aesthetic and I think she did great with the music choice as well. The video gives me a calming feel. Also great artwork!

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