View from My Window : Research
As I look out my window the first thing I see is the vanilla colored air conditioner extruding out of my window frame, and its safeguarded tightly by steel bars that have rusted as the years gone by. To the left a fire escape just as old and rusted is mounted. As I look past the steel window guard instantly the street comes into view, I can see the concrete stretch across my side of the street as well as the other side, however with a asphalt road as the partition and the cars nicely lined along the sides. On the other side of the street I see the same types of apartment buildings as mine which is a different color from mine, a brick red.
Jessica Pareja, 
Richard Rice, and 
Sherrbear are discussing. 
Jessica Pareja 12:22 pm on September 11, 2014 Permalink |
I really liked your description you were able to describe the colors of what you see even when we can’t see it. Your description was short and to the point, Great work!
Richard Rice 12:08 am on September 10, 2014 Permalink |
I think your sketch was really cool and I like your description but I think based on the guidelines I think you should speak more on they lines and shapes you can see outside your window.
Sherrbear 8:10 pm on September 9, 2014 Permalink |
Even though I saw your thumbnails of what you see out your window, I liked the writing more 🙂 good job!