Christopher Swift October 5, 2016 at 5:10 pm Very good, Hawa. I especially appreciate the organization of your response. The beginning of your third paragraph is unclear. Next time proofread your work before submitting. The second half of the paragraph is stronger and your points make sense. Reply ↓
Very good, Hawa. I especially appreciate the organization of your response. The beginning of your third paragraph is unclear. Next time proofread your work before submitting. The second half of the paragraph is stronger and your points make sense.