Response to Desiree’s Baby

Overall the story was very good. The start was slow, but necessary as it laid the groundwork of Desiree and her husband, Armand.  It wasn’t completely dramatic but there was tension in the middle of the story, and the wording kept a “little” mystery around why Armand was so upset, although it wasn’t hard to figure it out.  The twist at the end was great, also a great cliffhanger to the reading it self, because now I’ve become really intrigued in the story.