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ENG1121 Comp2, SP2022

Jacquelyn Blain

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    • Week Fourteen: May 11 – May 17
    • Week Thirteen: May 4 – May 10
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    • Week Nine: Mar 30 – Apr 5
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  • Course Profile
  • Announcements
  • Course Info
    • Syllabus – ENG 1121 O008
    • Schedule
    • Contact Info & Communications
    • Course Readings
  • Weekly Schedules
    • Week Fourteen: May 11 – May 17
    • Week Thirteen: May 4 – May 10
    • Week Twelve: Apr 27 – May 3
    • Week Eleven: Apr 13 – after Spring Break
    • Week Ten: April 6 – April 12
    • Week Nine: Mar 30 – Apr 5
    • Week Eight: Mar 23 – Mar 29
    • Week Seven: Mar 16 – Mar 22
    • Week Six: Mar 9 – Mar 15
    • Week Five: Mar 2 – Mar 8
    • Week Four: Feb 23 – Mar 1
    • Week Three: Feb 16 – Feb 22
    • Week 2 schedule – Feb 9-Feb 15
    • Week 1 schedule – Feb 2-Feb 8
  • Unit Assignments
    • Unit 1 – Portrait of a Word
    • Unit 2 – Feature Story: Finding Your Beat
    • Unit 3 – New Audience, New Genre
    • Final Portfolio
  • Blog
    • article check-in
    • Feature Proposal
    • My Beat
    • Portrait Revision Memo
    • Klass
    • Diaz
    • What matters
    • Introductions
  • Tutorials, Help & Resources
    • Class Resources
    • College Resources
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I need to organize my explanations better. If it is too disorganized it can confuse the reader. I should start by saying there is multiple explanations and focus on one at a time. I also should try to not repeat myself.

March 9, 2022 / Jose Perez / 0 Comments

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WELCOME! This is your instructor Jackie Blain (aka Donna Blain according to CUNY) welcoming you to ENG1121 — all about writing both for school and for the world we live in. You can find me on our Slack workspace or via email DBlain@citytech.cuny.edu.

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