I really enjoyed the article revision workshop last Tuesday. I think it is a great way to get more feedback regarding you are at work therefore it will make it easier for you to revise your work and create a stronger piece. I really enjoyed reading everyone’s comments. They gave me some really great ideas on how to expand my peace and how to make it make more sense to the reader. Sometimes when you’re writing about yourself you tend to right now considering the reader who knows nothing about your story. So this was very helpful to have multiple people read my article before publishing it.