The feedback that I have received from those who have read my article was valuable for me to see if the message I was trying to get across to the reader can be seen. I saw a lot of personal experience in them along with some interesting statistics as well, they were all put together pretty well along with their nut grafs which can allow me to revise my own article with some of the same features I’ve seen that can be improved on.

I would add more subheading and more detailed sections for each part of my article so that the reader can have it all presented to them in a more fluent way so they wouldn’t get too confused.