The feedback I got was to move the links to the end of the essay. What I saw from others article’s is that they had better writing to people than myself It is hard for me to write to people so I mostly write research papers. For revisions I could try to write to people instead of a science point of view.
It’s been a difficult year for us, for the groups we belong to, so let’s write about it!
I’m Jackie Blain, and you can find me on our Slack workspace or via email DBlain@citytech.cuny.edu.