Prof Jacquelyn Blain
Things I should try to do when revising my draft…
1. Cutting out unnecessary words as much as possible.
2. Working on making a powerful introduction paragraph followed by equally as strong body paragraphs.
3. Refrain from grammar and spelling mistakes.
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