Jacquelyn Blain

Final Revision ideas

Before I start my final revision, I wan to read my unit 1 essay and compare that to my unit 3 work. I want to get an understanding of what i have improved on and how my writing style has changed over the term. Something that will help with this is the free write we did in class because its basically the same thing, it is kind of showing as what we have improved in and what we are still working on. And after reviewing my unit 1 and 3 work, I think I can start write the final because I would than now what I have done to improve and what I am still working on.

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  1. Jacquelyn Blain

    You’re not in bad shape, overall, to be honest. Do take a look at my notes on your drafts in the Google Drive — address them, make the revisions I’m talking about, and you’ll be good. If you want to have a brief one-on-one conference, that would be great because you’ve pretty close on both of them. Good ideas about writing the Final Reflection, by the way.

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