1. Read Parts 1 & 2 of feed and blog in response (don’t forget to think through the text in relation the Utopian & Dystopian Framework that I handed out in class). We will be spending all of class on Tuesday discussing the first parts of the novel, and you should come in prepared for this discussion, and for freewriting and a quiz on the assigned reading.
2. Essay #1 Final Drafts are due (portfolio folder & e-mailed file) by the start of class. Make sure to review the Essay #1 Assignment and the Essay Guidelines (for formatting, electronic submission) before submitting your final draft. You can also find the Peer Review Assignment (that we did in class last week) on our site, if you want to use it to revise your new drafts.
Keep in mind:
- The key to strong/successful essay is to move from summary to analysis/critical thinking/argument. Instead of merely summarizing Turkle, Marche, or Catfish, you should put some text (either the movie Catfish, or a concrete/specific personal experience) in conversation with the Marche or Turkle readings. To do this, you will need to provide specific quotes from Marche or Turkle (that illustrate the concepts from them you are using). Then, your essay should help your readers to understand these texts (the documentary or your experience) through the lens/theoretical framework that Marche/Turkle provides. For example, you way to provide an analysis of how Angela, in Catfish, “curates” her identity. Or, you may want to look at how, in your own experience, people use social media (Facebook, Instagram, etc.) to form superficial connections. The key, in either case, is to provide specific, concrete details (rather than a very general discussion) and a focused analysis.
- Your Introduction (thesis paragraph) should provide an overview of your argument in the essay (your thesis statement should be the final sentence of this first paragraph).
- You should include a complete, fully revised Cover Letter as the first page of your Essay.
Would you consider being alone and loneliness the same thing? Well research specifically done on Facebook advocates has caught the attention of many Doctors on this matter, and all the negative effects that come along with social media. Stephen Marche makes plenty of surprising points in his article “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely”. For instance Isolating your self from the real world, real life vs. online life, and overall the unprecedented alienation. Loneliness is not a matter of external conditions but rather more of a psychological state which can cause Neuroticism, or anxiety with due time. This is rapidly growing which is expected to soon surpass another addictive industry; such as the global coffee industry which is estimated to gross an astonishing $100 billion dollars in revenue which goes to show that there might me more people using Facebook than drinking coffee. Long term health concerns are a issue for humanity in this situation.
The Article Discusses the Disadvantages of having a conversation through technology instead of a face to face conversation. According to the article people who spend their time on devices and social network sights are finding themselves lacking in the ability to communicate in person. The topic involving Facebook is also something to discuss considering it came during a time when loneliness in humanity was at an all time high people were promised a chance to change that while in fact it only made online communication and online rep a thing of great interest while the good old days of hanging out with friends and talking with other people face to face a thing of the past. People saw themselves able to change their lives through the internet and they though themselves able to do anything and be anyone while in fact in the real world they could be the most antisocial person in the world.
In the article “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely?” it speaks about how social media has taken over some people lives. It also speaks on how we can have thousands of friends but still be all alone. One point she tried to prove the most is no matter how much were connected one the web some people are still alone. She feels like social media is good at times but its mainly bad. Its bad because it consumes time and takes away the fun in verbal communication. The author of the article also feel Facebook and social media sites is just a bunch of fantasies in which we use it to escape reality. Meaning we can be almost anybody online.But when it comes down to reality we can’t hide from that. Why because you gotta live your regular daily life.
In Stephen Marche’s article, Is Facebook Making Us Lonely? the author describes the effects that social media has on one. One effect that is brought up throughout the article is loneliness, in which is made the more often one drowns themselves in social media. Facebook in particular, is the target of this article, with its enormous audience, Facebook is the go-to website to see latest gossip, get in touch with everyone, and BE in touch with everyone. The research put into the Lonely topic consists of psychologist’s opinions and real events. Unfortunately, technology gives one access to the internet, allowing one to be deeply drowned within the internet’s vast ocean of information.
The article “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely?” by Stephen Marche, he discusses about social media especially Facebook that makes people’s life have more connection than ever before. However, his main idea is Facebook makes us lonelier. Farther more, lonely is making us mentally and physically ill. He shows us many researches from professional study in Facebook to support his idea. Even before Facebook, since we have the Internet, the research shows that increased Internet usage is already increased loneliness. Stephen wants to show that social media is very important problem now in people’s life. He wants us to understand, how Facebook is making us lonely.
In the article “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely?” by Stephen Marche, loneliness is the main point being discussed. The relationship between Technology and loneliness is strong. The social media used in technology has many good and bad influences. Facebook, is one example of social media that is being discussed, that has influenced how people communicate. The article states that “ That one little phrase, Your real friends—so quaint, so charmingly mothering—perfectly encapsulates the anxieties that social media have produced: the fears that Facebook is interfering with our real friendships, distancing us from each other, making us lonelier; and that social networking might be spreading the very isolation it seemed designed to conquer.” In other words, social media can cause a person to distance themselves from others because they are too busy using it, posting stuff and communicating with people, that they pay little attention to real friends. The good thing about social media is that you can communicate without having to be face-to-face with a person.
In the article “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely?” Stephen Marche stated that the advent of social media like Facebook and Twitter has strengthening our connections. However, he purported that research suggest the rise in loneliness and narcissism. He went further to outline mental and physical illness to our souls and society as a result of the loneliness caused by Facebook. Stephen Marche gave an example of Yvette Vickers’s mysterious death, comparing the attention she received in death and to the final years of her life. His argument incorporates religious feelings based on German study on loneliness. The report states that active believers who saw God as abstract and helpful rather than as a wrathful immediate presence were less lonely and that the mere belief in God was relatively independent of loneliness. He also mentioned few researchers like Burke’s whose research does not support the assertion that Facebook create loneliness rather she said the people who experience loneliness on Facebook are lonely away from Facebook.
In the article, “Is Facebook making us lonely” the author Stephen Marche shows how effective loneliness can be and what causes loneliness. Stephen proves her point by giving facts and studies to show how technology has the most effect in our life because it isolates us from the real world, from our friends, and families. The more we connect on Facebook the lonelier we become. Loneliness can make us physically and mentally ill.
Is Facebook making us lonely? that right their is a very controversy subject while some people would agree and while others will disagree. I personally would agree with the article and say that Facebook does make people lonely in many ways maybe even more depending on the situation and the person itself. The reason I believe that it makes people lonely is because people spend a lot of time in the social network trying to impress their pears that they forget about other things such as hanging with their real friends and focus on school. But the real reason that Facebook take a lot of peoples time is because it allows you to be anyone that you want to be picture editing can allow you to look the way you want to look and allow to get the attention that most people always wanted in real life by spending lots of time posting pictures and status that will get you like that symbolize attention and acceptance that most people in the network crave.