Professor Belli | Fall 2022 | City Tech

Author: Jamani Anderson (Page 1 of 2)

unit 1 and unit 2 revision

So far I didn’t really have any revisions on unit 1 assignment because the assignment was straight forward with accurate directions. so what I did was write down my ideas in my notebook for my unit 1 assignment then edit it all in one paragraph for any errors or gammer corrections to make sure my unit 1 narrative was very much accurate and I explained majority of everything that the assignment has asked.

Unit 2 Revision

now for unit 2 I had two topics for research my first was a scientific question which had some information but wasn’t really enough and the question was too straight forward so then I came up with another research question and comes to find out I was able to find more information than for the last research question I had for the second research question i had a total of 4 sources that I have concluded as one this way I have something that I can build on and make more informative in some ways. I also had to correct my grammar and my run long sentences to make them shorter which I did in my revisions and it worked the way how I wanted it too. I make sure that I made my sentence structures a make more sense in a way that viewers and other readers may understand.

what makes sources so annoying?

According to Kyle D. Stedman on the article annoying ways people use sources I feel as that he’s trying to persuade readers about different ways of how people are using sources and receiving so much judgement towards it in a way that it becomes annoying. In regards to this Kyle D Stedman he states that ” writers can forget that their are readers are just annoyed at writing that fails to follow conventions as drivers are when stuck behind a car that fails to move over”. However I believe that being able to read and writer are two different concepts of learning I mean as a reader you have a vision of what you are reading and the knowledge behind it. In other terms as a writer I think you propose to writing with the ideas that you may have in your mind. Overall I think Stedman is trying to tell readers the difference between a reader and a writer in a way.

In addition to this Stedman has also mentioned about how people are unreasonable and picky when it comes to using their own sources, paraphrases, and quotations. The reason for this is that readers may not be able to anticipate from what those writers have wrote thats why it would be hard to understand from those readers in terms of their writing context . Furthermore, in terms of using citations as Stedman mentions ” I cite a source by hyperlinking in an academic essay, I use parenthetical citation that refers to a list of references at the end of the essay”. In reference to this I believe as writers we use citations without hyperlink by in other references we do however its a matter of where we got our information so we use hyperlinks to identify where we got our information from. Stedman also mentions that ” I strategically learn the expectations of my us academic audience, what I really want to say comes across smoothly, without little annoying blips in my readers’ experience”. Apart from this, learning your audience comes with experiencing what you actually thought yourself in terms of writing.

Unit 3 proposal based on how money affects people and their living opportunities

According to my research overall in unit 2 I plan to do a non fictional genre since Im persuading to my readers about how money affects the most important things in life such as its people and their living opportunities. I mean since I have researched a lot from unit 2 I think I may be able to create more ideas as I write about what I wrote for unit 2 and expand it more in terms of making my words and sentences actually fit and make more sense. I want the readers to understand the importance of money and how it can benefit people in a positive and a negative way.

How does money affect the most important things in life such as its people and their living opportunities?

Source 3: https://investedwallet.com/money-is-important/

Works Cited

“Why Money Is Important And The Role It Plays in Our Lives?”

Invested Wallet April 11, 2022 https://investedwallet.com/money-is-important/

Summary

In this research by Todd Kunsman He explains why money is important and the role it plays in our lives.  Todd Kunsman states that “the reason money is so important is that it provides options for you to live a better life that you choose and puts you in control”. Which means that all the options you may have in mind money plays a major role because it helps you benefit more throughout your advantages of living a better life for better opportunities. Todd Kunsman also states that “having money and being comfortable with finances also gives you freedom and options to decide how you want to live and support the things you care most about in your life”.  This means that when you have money in your hands and have some sort of comfort within their finances it gives you freedom and opportunities on how you may want to live and also support the things you love the most. Todd Kunsman also states that “while your whole life does not need to focus on money and accumulating wealth, it is still important to dedicate your time to understanding it and building a strategy. Which means that money may not being important to people as much but it shows a understanding of how people can use money to build a strategy to build amongst more sources of income and financial needs which is known as a 6 figure which is a strategy in terms of own multiple business and earning more money from those business to serve a higher income to achieve more wealth and success.

Todd Kunsman states that “Money is important because it gives you the freedom to do what you want, when you want, where you want”. which means you reach a point where you can just walk away from a job you hate and are not reliant on anyone’s financial support.  Todd Kunsman also mentions that “Being able to make choices and have options is one of the best feelings in the world. Knowing you are stuck in a particular situation because you need the money or financial help is frustrating, so removing that from your life is a great relief”.   Which means that being able to make your own choices shows a better influence in your life not only that you have the options but also removing negative emotions from your life which would be a great relief of stress because you may not need money or the use of financial help anymore this is why money gives you multiple options.

Reflection

Throughout this part of my research I was able to acknowledge reasons from Todd kunsman about why money is important and the real benefits of money.

Todd Kunsman has showed how money gives you your financial freedom in many ways and how money can give you other options as to how you value the choices you make in terms of being wealthy. Todd Kunsman believes that money should not be your stress at all in facts he states that money allowes you to “make choices and have options is one of the best feelings in the world”. Todd kunsman also mentions that “At some point, you may reach a level of income or financial freedom where you can afford to give back”. Which means that not only money lets you give back but it also helps support the communities beside you in the american society you live in. Todd Kunsman also states that “Helping out charities, your local community, or other causes is a great feeling and it can create happiness when you are helping others”.

Which is true helping out charities can be a supportive way of treating your local community in a positive way and can create happiness for others who would like to go above and beyond when they have money in their hands.

Brief rhetorical analysis

In terms of Todd Kunsman writing style I realized he provides a meaningful purpose about how money can benefit throughout people’s lives and also how money can give you your own freedom as well.   Todd kunsman has implemented people’s lives to mot only know how money holds something special in your heart but also shows how money can get you to do anything you may dream of it gives you options how you may want to use your money within the financial advantages that you may use to support others in a way of their own living standards.  One of the most powerful things that Todd Kunsman has mentioned is that you may not always have to rely on money because that’s where financial stress is a common problem among people and families.  Which is true because some families may have different experiences with being in debt of having money.

Short Analysis

Many reasons why Todd Kunsman chose to genre mainly was because he wanted to persuade readers that money is not only important amongst the people who have it but it also creates opportunities for people to help others and live life to the fullest whether you may have choices to choose from in particular to more experiences you may want to do with your families while you have your high income of money.

Todd Kunsman wanted to create life experiences with money so people won’t end up regretting what they truly earned or deserved.  Todd Kunsman impacted people to a point where he makes the audience feels more less worried about money in complicated situations. In fact, he wants the audience to feel happier and more desired for their own money they make because that way they can enjoy their freedom more willingly and not feel depressed or ashamed of not being wealthy.

Quotes

“The reason money is so important is that it provides options for you to live a better life that you choose and puts you in control”.

“Having money and being comfortable with finances also gives you freedom and options to decide how you want to live and support the things you care most about in your life”. 

“Money is not everything in this world, but it can be powerful in helping you achieve your goals and let you make the best of the short life we all have”. 

“Money is important because it gives you the freedom to do what you want, when you want, where you want”.

“One of the most powerful feelings you can have is knowing you do not need to worry about money”.

“Having money and having a financial plan creates more security for you and your family”. 

“When you have money, it creates opportunities for you to get more out of life, travel the world, try new things, and get out of your own bubble of where you live”.

“This can also help drive more happiness overall as you are experiencing more that life has to offer”.

Source 2 : based on how money affects the most important things in life such as its people and their living opportunities.

Works Cited

Why Money Is Important: Benefits & Downsides by Christy Rakoczy

https://lendedu.com/blog/why-money-is-important/

     Summary

In this research study by Christy Rakoczy she implements why money is important and she states that “the importance of money is clear when you factor in the costs of necessities to sustain life”.  Which means that the importance of money could be an important factor of costs throughout american society and the lives that are at risk.    Christy Rakoczy also mentions that “money can’t buy happiness, but financial wellbeing is important if you want to provide for your family’s basic need”. Which means that she interpreting that being financial shows a wellbeing of how you deal with money and why it is important that should provide for your family’s basic needs.    Christy Rakoczy states that “At some point in your life, you’ve probably heard someone say they don’t care about money you may have even said that yourself. While this sentiment sounds nice in theory, the reality is for better or worse   that you shouldn’t underestimate the importance of money”. Which means that she deeply explains how valuable money is towards your life and that you shouldn’t feel that money doesn’t hold a place in your life   Christy Rakoczy mentions that “even human beings need money to pay for all the things that make your life possible, such as shelter, food, healthcare bills, and a good education.”  What she is persuading towards the audience is that people may need money in order to provide for all the opportunities that helped them survive throughout this american society. Christy Rakoczy also states that “because of money its necessary for obtaining the goods and services you need to survive an understanding of personal finance is essential”. This means that because of money its necessary to take advantage amongst all the goods and services that been provided to us as people so we would be able to understand that personal finance is important.

Reflection

Throughout my own research I was able to encounter from Christy Rakoczy that the importance of money is the reason why people live throughout american society and why money means so much to people not only did she explain the importance of money but Christy Rakoczy also mentions that money can be a cost for future purposes not only for families but for other opportunities in life that were also provided towards these people.  She believes that people should be more responsible when it comes to the importance of money and what they should use it for like for example shelter, food, education, health care, and other resources as well. Christy Rakoczy also mentions that “money can also be a root of evil”. Which means that people with so much money can eventually end up being in debt of what they use their money for in terms of the wrong reasons.     Christy Rakoczy also mentions that “money makes it easier to trade your labor for a diverse set of good and services”.  Which means that money involves a better advantage amongst labor cost and the set of good services provided towards people as well.

Brief Rhetorical analysis

In terms of Christy Rakoczy writing style I realized she is a greater author in terms of influencing the audience on why money is important and why we would need money in the first place I mean money plays a major role in our lives and to be able to survive financially we would need money in the world to be successful throughout the opportunities given to us throughout american society. Christy Rakoczy supports the money system and how its being manageable towards its people and the services provided. Overall Christy Rakoczy has persuaded people about the benefits of money using it for labor cost and how can be useful towards other families who are living at poor risk as well.

Short Analysis

I realized that the reason why Christy Rakoczy chose this genre was to influence the audience to she knows the elements of how money is being used and the benefits from using it. In addition to that she wants readers to know that money is not only a negative aspect throughout human beings but also a positive aspect for people people’s outcomes throughout labor cost and other resources they made need to survive throughout this american society. Christy   Rakoczy has also implemented as to reasons why we would need money as well as using it for future purposes based on how money is meant to be used among people.

Quotes

“The importance of money is clear when you factor in the costs of necessities to sustain life. It can’t buy happiness, but financial wellbeing is important if you want to provide for your family’s basic needs”.

“At some point in your life, you’ve probably heard someone say they don’t care about money; you may have even said that yourself”. “While this sentiment sounds nice in theory, the reality is for better or worse that you shouldn’t underestimate the importance of money”.

“Money can’t buy happiness, but it can buy security and safety for you and your loved ones”.

“Human beings need money to pay for all the things that make your life possible, such as shelter, food, healthcare bills, and a good education”.

“You don’t necessarily need to be Bill Gates or have a lot of money to pay for these things, but you will need some money until the day you die”. 

“Because money is necessary for obtaining the goods and services you need to survive, an understanding of personal finance is essential”.

“You need to be responsible with the money you earn and save enough for the future to ensure you will still have enough leftover when you can no longer trade your labor for money”.

finding all sorts of genres

In General Genres made me think more throughout my educational experience not only that The genres I looked up to were scientific genres like for instance animal discoveries, also music genres, and mystery genres.

These Genres made an impact throughout my life as a child as I was experiencing other shows and books. As a kid I use to anticipate on reading mystery books such as Death on the nile by Agatha Christie which was about a Belgain sleuth Hercule Poirot’s vacation aboard a glamorous river streamer turns into a terrifying for murderer when a picture perfect couple’s idylicc honeymoon is tragically cut short. this book was very interesting to me overall. I learned how the investigation began throughout this tragic mystery which ended in a sad ending I also interpreted some clues throughout this mystery book involving how the murder of the couples was set up and how it began from beginning to end.

overall mystery genres taught me a lot of experiences on how mysteries are being solved in a more efficient way it also gave me logical reasons on why people get into incidents that occurs in tragic situations. Throughout all aspects of Genres this taught me a lot about focusing more on the quantities of why a genre means to me and how its being illustrated in a clearer mindset. what genres mainly have in common is that they all have similar traits of their consumers whether it be drama, sadness, depression, or anger to a specific character illustrating ideas that may contribute to the consumer may result in a more comparing and contrasting way. Among these sorts of genres they have cohesive meaning behind them which means they can illustrates different stories and topics that are worth viewing differently or may catch a persons interest.

As for research the best genres to use are reports or newspapers you benefit and learn all from them which sometimes may cause pop up questions you may want to ask yourself sometimes. Reasons why these genres are good is because you learn more about the historical events that happened in the past which allows you to pull facts and information that can be useful in a way that you come up with a logical reason based on evidence which allows you to fulfill your conclusion.

Overall my unit two research would be a nonfictional genre involving money and how it important it is throughout our daily lives. My topic is mostly influenced with facts and logical reasons to provide context towards many impulse conceptions that we come across. research based on a nonfictional genre usually contains many sources as well leading up to interpretations among your audience which would help them understand your topic better and illustrate where your going with your desired topic you choose. when I find sources that I can use I’m able to pull out facts that I can use to support my own logical reasoning behind the source thats being citied which allows me to understand were I’m going with the research question I chose.

why do I always write what does writing mean to me in some ways ?

when I write I always have many ideas of how I’m going to write or how I’m going to write I can be creative sometimes. I use to write lyrics based of a song I always use to listen to as well. I write because it means not only that I’m knowledgeable of my own words but also knowledgable about the phrases and sentences I use.

In my creative writing I discuss topics such as money and wealth and how it supports people’s lives in a way the positive affects and the negative affects how can it contribute to a diversity of people and how can it affect them poorly and how it can affect them to become more rich as well as supporting themselves and their families wants and needs. writing is something I always did and I enjoyed it as a kid I used many ideas to form all my chances of being a successful writer.

As a personal writer I can increase my thoughts to a point where it allows me to focus on how I personally approach my writing skills as something that really meant something to me like for example my life growing up I always knew how I can come about my writing growing up as a kid and understanding the meaning or analysis behind personal writing.

As of Texting I feel like when I’m send messages towards a person I message people directly to a point where I can be able to use clear messages and make sense of the message I’m sending to the person to be able to make them understand to my clear approach of the message I send it accurately tells us how often we text and how we may accurately text each other in a way.

Revision (10/25) Source entry 1 based on how money affects the most important things in life such as its people and their living opportunities.

updated version (10/26)

Works Cited

Interviewing over 1,200 rich people has taught me exactly how money affects the most important things in our lives, Business Insider October 26, 2022

https://www.businessinsider.com/how-money-affects-the-most-important-things-in-life-2015-8

Summary

A research study was contributed by the name of Steve Siebold, in this research he explains “how money has been blamed as an issue for everything from wars to infidelity, from destroying friendships to wrecking families in addition to that Steve Siebold also mentions that in the minds of the masses, more ways they can demonize money, the more validated they feel for not seeking their own fortunes”. Steve Siebold ideas came to point where he’s seeing positive ways that money can enhance the most important things in life like our health, family relationships, and friendships, most people would rather scorn money and tell you how it can destroy the things we hold closest to our hearts. Steve Siebold wants readers to not contribute to people who think negative and wouldn’t know any better but also reveal the truth that money is not the most important thing in life, but will make the most important things in life so much better. “He reveals another truth that wealth gives people better access to world class health care, preventive medicine, and alternative treatments and also persuades people that if they need specific cutting-edge procedure that’s not available where you live, you would have to simply fly to a place that offers it as well”. He reasons with people that another logical reason of being rich makes you healthier is the elimination of the biggest stressor of the masses: money. “The wealthy don’t have sleepless nights worrying about paying their bills.” “He states that the common middle-class beliefs that he encountered is the mistake people made in terms of choosing between world-class success and a happy family life”. “Steve Siebold believes that the masses have been brainwashed to believe it’s an either/or equation”. This is rooted in a fear and scarcity mentality that says you must choose, because there is only so much time in a day. In terms of money Steve Siebold believes that If you love your family, get rich and give them more of your time, plus opportunities only money can buy. Figure out a way to be more efficient with your time because money can help your family live its dreams. Instead of using your family as an excuse, use them as your primary motivation to start earning more and creating a better advantage for you and your family. Another Scenario “Steve Siebold came up with is that another common belief that keeps people from getting rich is the idea that they’ll lose their best friends if they move into the biggest house on the block” which is true because sometimes people can lose money that way and it can’t pay the rent bills back in return. “Steve Siebold states that Wealth will bring you more opportunity to make friends than anything else in the world but it also can contribute to more positive outcomes”.  “Steve Siebold states that It’s true, money doesn’t buy happiness but it will make you more comfortable, open doors, create opportunities, and make the good things in your life even better”. “It may even save your life or the life of a loved one”. In this case Steve Siebold is persuading his audience that money can’t buy happiness but it can create better opportunities for you in a way and make life better with your family and also the life you live now.

Reflection

Based on my research I was able to interpret the positive aspects of how many can lead to a better aspect throughout people’s lives and how it can contribute to families and other resources. I notice that Steve Siebold wants readers to not contribute to people who think negative and wouldn’t know any better but also reveal the truth that money is not the most important thing in life, but will make the most important things in life so much better. He reveals another truth that wealth gives people better access to world class health care, preventive medicine, and alternative treatments and also persuades people that if they need specific cutting-edge procedure that’s not available where you live, you would have to simply fly to a place that offers it as well. He reasons with people that another logical reason of being rich makes you healthier is the elimination of the biggest stressor of the masses: money. The wealthy don’t have sleepless nights worrying about paying their bills. He states that the common middle-class beliefs that he encountered is the mistake people made in terms of choosing between world-class success and a happy family life.

Brief rhetorical analysis

In terms of Steve Siebold writing style and purpose I realize that he is a influencer because he influenced people to realize how money is important to many lives but also contribute to how money can negatively affect the aspects of people”s lives as well he showed viewers what money can lead to and what money can get you stuck in terms of problems that people may encounter or that may feel that their more in debt in a way of how their living in this american society it changes the way how people live and how people think when they have money or many opportunities involving money and resources among themselves. In many cases I think Steve Siebold is credible for what he does as a influencer because he relates to how people use their money in terms of housing jobs resources relationships with family and all sorts of income involving educational opportunities for people as well.

Short Analysis

I realized that the reason that Steve Siebold chose this genre is because you wants his readers to know the knowledge behind money and how powerful it can become amongst the resources we chose to spend money on especially for people who are in relationships educational careers and for people who have mental health problems or problems with relationships and all overall I think this was a good choice for the intended audience because he gives us readers a explanation of the positive aspects of money and the negative aspects of money overall throughout this American society we live in.

Key Quotes

“It has been blamed for everything from wars to infidelity, from destroying friendships to wrecking families.” “In the minds of the masses, the more ways they can demonize money, the more validated they feel for not seeking their own fortunes”.

“Instead of seeing the positive ways that money can enhance the most important things in life like our health, family relationships, and friendships, most people would rather scorn money and tell you how it can destroy the things we hold closest to our hearts”.

“Don’t listen to negative people who don’t know any better”. “The truth is money is not the most important thing in life, but it will make the most important things in life so much better”.

“The truth is wealth gives you far better access to world-class healthcare, preventive medicine, and alternative treatments”. “If you need a specific cutting-edge procedure that’s not available where you live, you simply fly to a place that offers it”.

“Another reason being rich makes you healthier is the elimination of the biggest stressor of the masses: money”. “The wealthy don’t have sleepless nights worrying about paying their bills”. 

“The most common middle-class belief I have encountered is the mistaken idea that you have to choose between world-class success and a happy family life”. “The masses have been brainwashed to believe it’s an either/or equation”. “This is rooted in a fear and scarcity mentality that says you must choose, because there is only so much time in a day”.

“If you love your family, get rich and give them more of your time, plus opportunities only money can buy”. Figure out a way to be more efficient with your time because money can help your family live its dreams”. “Instead of using your family as an excuse, use them as your primary motivation to start earning more”.

“Another common belief that keeps people from getting rich is the idea that they’ll lose their best friends if they move into the biggest house on the block”.

“Wealth will bring you more opportunity to make friends than anything else in the world”.

“It’s true, money doesn’t buy happiness”. “But it will make you more comfortable, open doors, create opportunities, and make the good things in your life even better. It may even save your life or the life of a loved on

Works Cited

Interviewing over 1,200 rich people has taught me exactly how money affects the most important things in our lives, Business Insider October 26, 2022

https://www.businessinsider.com/how-money-affects-the-most-important-things-in-life-2015-8

original version (10/25)

Summary

A research study was contributed by the name of Steve Siebold, in this research he explains how money has been blamed as an issue for everything from wars to infidelity, from destroying friendships to wrecking families In addition to that Steve Siebold also mentions that in the minds of the masses, more ways they can demonize money, the more validated they feel for not seeking their own fortunes.

Steve Siebold ideas came to point were he’s seeing positive ways that money can enhance the most important things in life like our health, family relationships, and friendships, most people would rather scorn money and tell you how it can destroy the things we hold closest to our hearts.

Steve Siebold wants readers to not contribute to people who think negative and wouldn’t know any better but also reveal the truth that money is not the most important thing in life, but will make the most important things in life so much better. He reveals another truth that wealth gives people better access to world class health care, preventive medicine, and alternative treatments and also persuades people that if they need specific cutting edge procedure that’s not available where you live, you would have to simply fly to a place that offers it as well. He reasons with people that another logical reason of being rich makes you healthier is the elimination of the biggest stressor of the masses: money. The wealthy don’t have sleepless nights worrying about paying their bills. He states that the common middle class beliefs that he encountered is the mistake people made in terms of choosing between world-class success and a happy family life.

Steve Siebold believes that The masses have been brainwashed to believe it’s an either/or equation. This is rooted in a fear and scarcity mentality that says you must choose, because there is only so much time in a day.

In terms of money Steve Siebold believes that If you love your family, get rich and give them more of your time, plus opportunities only money can buy. Figure out a way to be more efficient with your time because money can help your family live its dreams. Instead of using your family as an excuse, use them as your primary motivation to start earning more and creating a better advantage for you and your family.

Another Scenario Steve Siebold came up with is that another common belief that keeps people from getting rich is the idea that they’ll lose their best friends if they move into the biggest house on the block which is true because sometimes people can lose money that way and it can”t pay the rent bills back in return.

Steve Siebold states that Wealth will bring you more opportunity to make friends than anything else in the world but it also can contribute to more positive outcomes.

Steve Siebold states that It’s true, money doesn’t buy happiness. But it will make you more comfortable, open doors, create opportunities, and make the good things in your life even better. It may even save your life or the life of a loved one.

In this case Steve Siebold is persuading his audience that money can”t buy happiness but it can create better opportunities for you in a way and make life more better with your family and also the life you live now.

Reflection

Based on my research I was able to interpret the positive aspects of how many can lead to a better aspect throughout people’s lives and how it can contribute to families and other resources. I notice that Steve Siebold wants readers to not contribute to people who think negative and wouldn’t know any better but also reveal the truth that money is not the most important thing in life, but will make the most important things in life so much better. He reveals another truth that wealth gives people better access to world class health care, preventive medicine, and alternative treatments and also persuades people that if they need specific cutting edge procedure that’s not available where you live, you would have to simply fly to a place that offers it as well. He reasons with people that another logical reason of being rich makes you healthier is the elimination of the biggest stressor of the masses: money. The wealthy don’t have sleepless nights worrying about paying their bills. He states that the common middle class beliefs that he encountered is the mistake people made in terms of choosing between world-class success and a happy family life.

Brief rhetorical analysis

In terms of Steve Siebold writing style and purpose I realize that he is a influencer because he influenced people to realize how money is important to many lives but also contribute to how money can negatively affect the aspects of people”s lives as well he showed viewers what money can lead to and what money can get you stuck in terms of problems that people may encounter or that may feel that their more in debt in a way of how their living in this american society it changes the way how people live and how people think when they have money or many opportunities involving money and resources among themselves. In many cases I think Steve Siebold is credible for what he does as a influencer because he relates to how people use their money in terms of housing jobs resources relationships with family and all sorts of income involving educational opportunities for people as well.

Short Analysis

I realized that the reason that Steve Siebold chose this genre is because you wants his readers to know the knowledge behind money and how powerful it can become amongst the resources we chose to spend money on especially for people who are in relationships educational careers and for people who have mental health problems or problems with relationships and all overall I think this was a good choice for the intended audience because he gives us readers a explantation of the positive aspects of money and the negative aspects of money overall throughout this american society we live in.

Key Quotes

“It has been blamed for everything from wars to infidelity, from destroying friendships to wrecking families.” “In the minds of the masses, the more ways they can demonize money, the more validated they feel for not seeking their own fortunes”.

“Instead of seeing the positive ways that money can enhance the most important things in life like our health, family relationships, and friendships, most people would rather scorn money and tell you how it can destroy the things we hold closest to our hearts”.

“Don’t listen to negative people who don’t know any better”. “The truth is money is not the most important thing in life, but it will make the most important things in life so much better”.

“The truth is wealth gives you far better access to world-class healthcare, preventive medicine, and alternative treatments”. “If you need a specific cutting-edge procedure that’s not available where you live, you simply fly to a place that offers it”.

“Another reason being rich makes you healthier is the elimination of the biggest stressor of the masses: money”. “The wealthy don’t have sleepless nights worrying about paying their bills”. 

“The most common middle-class belief I have encountered is the mistaken idea that you have to choose between world-class success and a happy family life”. “The masses have been brainwashed to believe it’s an either/or equation”. “This is rooted in a fear and scarcity mentality that says you must choose, because there is only so much time in a day”.

“If you love your family, get rich and give them more of your time, plus opportunities only money can buy”. Figure out a way to be more efficient with your time because money can help your family live its dreams”. “Instead of using your family as an excuse, use them as your primary motivation to start earning more”.

“Another common belief that keeps people from getting rich is the idea that they’ll lose their best friends if they move into the biggest house on the block”.

“Wealth will bring you more opportunity to make friends than anything else in the world”.

“It’s true, money doesn’t buy happiness”. “But it will make you more comfortable, open doors, create opportunities, and make the good things in your life even better. It may even save your life or the life of a loved one”.

original topic: which came first the earth or the sun? (10/13) revision (10/18) new topic : How has Money play a role in America’s social movements ?

Old Draft 10/13

How I got interested in this question is because I wanted to know the time frame of which came first the earth or the sun. I’m deeply interested in this question because I think I can pull as much information from this question easily in terms of research.  what I’m expecting to find in my research is which came first the earth or the sun based on information about the sun and the earth I wanted to know deeply how the sun form before the earth and learn the time frames of which developed first in terms of how the world came as one. I’m also expecting to find how the earth formed as one and how the sun formed as one.  I also wanted to know which was popular at the time the sun or the earth in order to know which came first.  If I come across any information that doesn’t match my hypothesis then no worries I’ll just research more deeply for more information based on the topic I recently choose.

Source 1: https://www.csmonitor.com/Science/2014/0928/Which-came-first-Earth-s-water-or-the-sun  The author quotes that “Scientists have long debated whether the solar system’s water came from ice ionized during the formation of the solar system, or if it predated the solar system and originated in the cold interstellar cloud of gas from which the sun itself was formed”  The author explanation behind this quote is that he’s trying to explain that scientists have discovered that the solar system’s water came from ice ionized during the formation of the solar system which means that the cold interstellar cloud of  gas  made the sun form which is a part of the solar system.

Source 2 : https://www.discovermagazine.com/the-sciences/earths-water-is-older-than-the-sun  The author quotes that  “ A new model of the chemistry of the early solar system finds that up to half the water now on Earth was inherited from an abundant supply of interstellar ice as our sun formed”.   The explanation behind this quote is telling the audience that scientists have developed a new model of chemistry of the early solar system that finds that up to half the water now on earth was inherited from an abundant supply of interstellar ice as the sun formed.

 Source 3 : https://news.uchicago.edu/explainer/formation-earth-and-moon-explained#howwhenearth  The author quotes that “The Earth, like all the other planets in the solar system, started out its life as a disc of dust and gas orbiting the young Sun”. “The dust particles were brought together by the forces of drag to form clumps of rock that grew into “planetesimals” tens to hundreds of miles across, and then to Mars-sized “protoplanets” by colliding with each other”.  “Earth grew to its final size through one last major collision with another Mars-sized object”.

The explanation behind this quote is explaining that The Earth like other planets started out as a disc of dust and gas orbiting the young sun and also how the dust particles were brought together by the forces of drag to form clumps of rock that grew into planetesimals which mad earth grew even more into its final size. I also notice that the author’s writing style seems for persuasive in a way among explaining which came first between the earth or the sun.

In conclusion: what I find in my research is how the earth and the sun formed and also which came first. What surprised me is that the earth eventually came first before the sun because of the way of how both developed in a certain period of time.

The understanding of my question has deepened in a way that it made me research more information among the earth and the sun in terms of how its formed and the time frame of which came first. What I learned that is most important is how the earth and the sun developed in a specific time frame.    I think other students or colleagues who are interested in scientific questions  like this should know about which came first the sun or the earth or which formed  first because then they will have an idea of which was made first in a specific time frame and how bother are created.

New Draft 10/18

Well overall speaking of money a-lot of people were poor throughout their lives and some people didn’t have the majority of jobs that were offered because they didn’t have ways of living so instead people have to find their ways to make money and support their own families but of course that wasn’t the case at all people were losing benefits and and loans due to low income amongst their own resources without money they wouldn’t be able to survive throughout their aspects of life. what interested me about this question is that I noticed that without money the society that. people would live in would eventually become bankrupt not only peoples benefits are screwed but people may also fear at risk of also losing their homes and not being able to provide enough value for their families wants and needs.

Even the governments would lose out towards society because without money the whole population would be in depth of how society is living and how it will fall amongst others living on the same background. In this research Im expected to find key ideas on how money not only affected its people but also how it affected the important things in life throughout society. I know that a-lot has changed throughout society but money shows a larger experience of how the important things in life are being affected in life. I will also go more in depth on how money infiltrated lives poorly and how truly important money affects the population with the amount of people involved within that society.

If I”m able to come across any sorts of information involving money and how it affects the important things in life then this should lead me to how money surrounds the community and how it supports the important phases of life not only the people but the society and how it evolved outrageously towards people and how it made people generously feel about having money in their own lives.

Among this question I have a strong possibility that money has affected people”s lives in many different ways such as their living opportunities. I will learn alot from this topic because I feel like I can achieve the outcome of how money is being affected towards people and their lives and how it may change the society in terms of living standards, certain bills people may have to pay, providing food for families and helping the whole community throughout their own living standards and accusations more better.

I will also talk about the living habits and also how money has affected that stage in life and how it became more inhabitable to most people in most for their own wants and needs. I feel like this question may influence others and show a better approach of why money is important to people”s lives and their own living habits.

Overall I feel like I expanded this research question enough to switch my thoughts around and dive deeper into my own ideas across this question and accurately support this question to the point where I know I can explore many ideas dealing with money and how it affected majority of people”s lives and the downfall amongst it.

what I’m trying to propose throughout this question is how money involves throughout people and their living opportunities the positive outcome and the negative outcome. The specifics behind this question made me realize how much money involves throughout people and the society throughout their differences of living standards. I’m curious about this question because I want to know how money impacted the daily lives of people and their own living standards.

The reason why I choose important is because I know that money contributes to many people in this american society that we live in today for example out of all human inventions, money was so powerful towards american society because it helped spark the development of writing and the organization of the first city states.

Money even allows us to meet our basic needs to buy food and shelter and pay for healthcare. Meeting these needs is essential, and if we don”t have enough money to do so. our person wellbeing and the wellbeing of the community as a whole suffers greatly. Having enough money also provides a sense of security, one that is often missing when people worry about unforeseen medical expenses or losing their job for example a study in 2017 found that almost 50% of Americans worry about their financial situation, and it impacts their mental health, relationships, diet, even their work performance. when I found out that money was very important in todays american society it made me very interested not only for the people or the health care or the mental health problems, or work performance or relationships, it was more so of the community that went through all of these issues and stress among how difficult it was to achieve money throughout this american society we live in.

In my research Im expected to find how important is money in our life and how people benefited from it. I’m expected to find how money contributed to people and how it changed their lives even if their lives is at risk at least I’m able find information among how money involved the american society change people”s lives equally. In today”s society money has been a problem throughout american society but also changed people’s lives living in that society further more congress passed the bank secrecy act of 1970 which requires banks to report any financial transactions of ten thousand dollars or more.

Congress followed this act sixteen years later with money laundering control act of 1986 which rendered money laundering as a federal crime alot of people are viewing this as a huge stepping stone in america”s society because people were struggling due to low income standards and transactions throughout banks due to money laundering and that’s how people were at risk of low wealth standards.

I want my research to cover how much money means to people and the world no matter the struggle or the benefits of their wants and needs throughout history and the american society we live in today.

If I find information that completely goes against what I find that therefore my opinion would change but nevertheless, it would be still interesting to me.

Currently, my belief is that it played an important role in american’s society in the development of certain movements and I expect to find more details to support my claim but in the scenario that my research goes against what information I expect to find, I will not change my belief and instead I will go into a different area of research. In the end, regardless of whether my point stands, I will definitely learn more about a topic that I am personally interested in. I also hope to inform the people who read it about the importance of money not just in today’s society, but throughout history.  from housing, to mental health, educational opportunities among others and food, Money has played an important role in not just the influence of people and their emotions, but in the development of humankind itself.

what is spiritual matter ?

My old title was how does curiosity affect me and My new title is what is spiritual matter? My rationale for changing is because my old title was basic and I needed a stronger title that can fit This title is more better because its very different from all my other post.

Growing up as a kid dealing with curiosity I was very skeptical in my learning environment I wasn’t really developed to learn something that actually interested me in terms of the new learning environment I was thought in school.

So I started to ask myself random questions that I never knew the answers to until I started to do research myself and figured out the best ways to achieve my learning ability and experience and make it something that resembles who I was as a person in terms of my education and I found my passion with observing the world as the climate changes and how its made me realize how fast the world has changed from what it used to be till now at that moment I realized I was capable and I knew what my strengths of interest was not being able to give up on what I had a passion for and that was my learning and what I was able to become interested in something I can share with others who possible wouldn’t know how learning can be hard as soon as it reaches your mind but once you find inner peace and do research for yourself everything seems like it makes sense in a way.

I became a thoughtful person and knew what my ideas value in terms of how I approached my goals and overcome my fears in a way.

curiosity wasn’t stopping me from achieving my goals it was more so the time I desired to put into my thoughts to overcome that phase in that specific time frame overall I felt successful for myself and I achieved more than I can ever imagine.

I was a very capable and smart person I just choose my options wisely before I start something more creative with my own mindset.

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